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MY HEART TELLS

My heart tells that I love you, dear but my brain yells that I should fear your valentine quest leading to debt crest so let’s just celebrate sans tear.* January 27,2024 *9th place, "Pickup lines for Valentines Day" Limerick Poetry Writing Premiere Contest; Sponsored by Suzette Richards; judged on 1/29/2024 My divine love-verse dedicated to my LORD and SAVIOUR:
Your love** to me, my God, is gift so dear Along peace, grace and mercy of life's gear... Midst gratitude mirth I treasure Your worth Thus, losing You is what I truly fear.
**I John 4:7-8 - "Beloved, let us love one another, for love is of God; and everyone who loves is born of God and knows God. He who does not love does not know God, for God is love."

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Date: 1/29/2024 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Sara K
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Date: 1/29/2024 5:16:00 AM
Yes, the conundrum of do we follow our heart or our brain? Congratulations on your placement, Beata.
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Date: 1/27/2024 10:40:00 AM
Lovely write many blessings
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Date: 1/27/2024 7:01:00 AM
what a joyful read -- the perfect Limerick. Well done
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