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My Heart Stopped Beating With Yours

My Heart Stopped Beating With Yours sitting by a flowing brook never again would she look he’s shattered heart from despair. never again desire and dare her fingers through his hair, touch his skin so fair. emotions clogged her throat sore leaving her with nothing more. tear dropped one last kiss his spirit gone she’ll miss. 1/13/2018

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Date: 1/21/2018 9:01:00 PM
Back to congratulate you, Eve. Superb.
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Date: 1/21/2018 4:39:00 AM
A lovely poem Eve, congrats :)
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Date: 1/21/2018 3:11:00 AM
Many brooks I've heard rapping, I dance with joy, end up clapping. All have spirit, what err the land, meandering journeys nature planned. To sit on their banks, meditating To them babbling over rocks, relating To times gone by in Wiltshire I first dedicated my heart to nature No regrets, not ever on my part, bar one, humans they broke her heart. Most brooks now dehydrated, gone, but hark, their spirits still rap on, memories, the day spent on their banks, Evoked by you Eve, my special thanks.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 1/21/2018 3:15:00 AM
Did not forget, ran out space, congratulations on your win, write on let your spirit sing... hugs Mick
Date: 1/20/2018 9:10:00 PM
Congratulations to you Eve, a wonderful melincholy write, xxoo
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Date: 1/20/2018 8:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Eve. Janice
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Date: 1/20/2018 5:35:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on your win Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/20/2018 4:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win Eve
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Date: 1/20/2018 11:35:00 AM
Eve, congrats on your win for this beautiful, sad poem. John
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Date: 1/20/2018 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations Eve :)
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Date: 1/20/2018 11:06:00 AM
one of the only ones who chose this theme, perfectly written sweet lady...congrats and thank you! :)-luloo
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Date: 1/18/2018 5:48:00 AM
Wonderful write, Eve ... very subtle sentiments in just ten tiny lines ...
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Date: 1/14/2018 7:31:00 PM
wow this exudes sadness. I really like how you did the challenge, Eve! Thanks for visiting my poem today.
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Date: 1/14/2018 12:42:00 PM
ohh, you tear me up with this marvelous piece, eve... much delighted!..huggs
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Date: 1/14/2018 11:50:00 AM
Sad poem just like your previous one.. you did well with the restrictions of the contest..
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Date: 1/14/2018 10:04:00 AM
Wonderful poignant penning Eve! My best to you xomo :)
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Date: 1/14/2018 8:35:00 AM
oh so sad Eve good luck with the contest.:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/14/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thank you, Jan, thinking of you and hope everything turns out well. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 1/14/2018 8:22:00 AM
Well done, Eve. GL
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/14/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thank you, Line.. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 1/14/2018 2:46:00 AM
Tragic but so beautifully done dear, Eve. Good luck in the contest.
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/14/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios for the compliment and the goodluck. Hugs Eve ~`*

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