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My Heart Sobs

I'm till struggling to connect with you... It feels strange that you are actually here, and so near.. You...walked past me a couple of times, Your eyes were glistening, sober, serious... Rushing by as if something deathly important lie ahead In that moment, I could hear my heart thrashing in my throat A victim in a prison, desperately closing those eyes from the fear Wanting...to reach out to you.... But not knowing how... How will you ever know the tears I have shed? How will you ever see the love and care in my eyes? Maybe we will never know what we could be... Maybe I am lost in uncertainty's sea But, please... Don't walk by me... No, not anymore... My sorrowful soul holds its breath when you do... And when you are gone again... My heart sobs...

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Lu Loo

Date: 9/28/2015 6:10:00 PM

I love the flow you carry, beautiful work all around :) -LU

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/28/2015 7:33:00 PM

Thanks for reading, Laura. Will definitely be reading some of your work soon! ~Laura

Gabriel Sundman

Date: 8/15/2015 5:28:00 AM

Lovin' the lyrics :)

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/15/2015 7:09:00 AM

Many thanks! I will be checking out your page soon. : ) ~Laura

Tim Smith

Date: 10/12/2014 11:18:00 PM

Very moving Laura...congrats on POD...hugs Tim

Jerry Swana

Date: 10/12/2014 6:25:00 PM

I little sad and dark for my liking but well done Laura hopefully you'll check out m work thank you

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/12/2014 5:46:00 PM

deeply touching feelings very beautifully penned well deserved congratulations laura god bless

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/12/2014 2:44:00 PM

Hello Laura, An absolutely moving write here. It exudes an utter depth sadness and profound emotion. It a FAV with me for sure!! Congratulations on having this fine work recognized for "Poem of the Day." Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/12/2014 1:17:00 PM

I love, love, love this poem. I am going to fav it and add you to my fav poets. Congratulations on being chosen as the feature poet with this poem of the day.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 10/12/2014 12:55:00 PM

Very in depth and deep Laura. Congrats on be featured as the poem of the day. Verlena

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2014 12:31:00 PM

- A deep and touching poem, Laura - Congrats with the title:"Poem of the Day" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sakshi Sitoot

Date: 10/12/2014 8:00:00 AM

Amazing poem Laura....!! I know how it feels!!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 7:45:00 AM

so deep and full of longing and so sad. Congrats on poem of the day Laura:-) hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/12/2014 7:20:00 AM

I know this feeling, Laura. You have described longing so well..."Wanting to reach but not knowing how"...Exceptional write, here. Congrats on being Poem of the Day!

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/11/2014 9:59:00 PM

The throb of unacknowledged eyes pushing roots of affection deep away in skull of crying love...to be a love ghost hurts Laura. The way you describe the glances, the nearness of adoration is heart pounding! J.A.B.