My Heart Sings

I can't explain the pleasure it brings
but to go on a Cruise is my favorite thing
        to cruise out to sea
        brings great joy to me
it's the one thing that makes my heart sing.

On board ship there's so much to do
each time I go I find something new
        of all that I've done Cruising the best
        I rate it by far ahead of the rest
if there is something better I haven't a clue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 10:33 AM
Ralph, a man after my own heart. HOw I wish I could get hubbie to know the joy of this. I went one time with someone and am dying to go back. No time, no money. It is the BEST vacation there could ever be!! Luv, andrea
Kendrick Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 10:53 AM
Great job in writing this one..Not so sure that I would enjoy a cruise..Hope that if you are going on one that you have a great time out there with all there is to do..Sara
Kapoor Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 8:34 AM
You reminded me one of my favorite movie The Sound of Music and its song 'My favorite things'. What a beauty you have sketched here in this lovely Poem and so sweetly in your melodious Limirick. Great write. Thanks my friend for your wonderful Poem and for a lovely cruise ride on the splashing sea waves. And many thanks for your good wishes. Sorry for some delay in acknowledging as I was away from Internet. Love and best wishes.....Ravindra....Ralph Taylor
Devonshire Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 6:47 PM
Got your note, Ralph, and this is a terrific entry for Dane Ann's zippedy doo dah contest! Go for it, if you haven't already entered. Love, Carolyn
Devonshire Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 6:32 PM
Thatis it, Ralph! If we hold a Soup convention, it should be on a cruise ship. I've yet to try this type of vacation, but you make it sound like fun. Enjoyed your double limerick, my friend. Love, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 7:15 AM
I felt like singing after reading your limerick Ralph :) thanks for the smiles... enjoy your day xxWilma
Peranteau Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 5:46 AM
Great Limerick Ralph..though for me, the side of the ship is where I spend my cruises, lol...I'm def a train man ! Great poem ! james
Culverhouse Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 5:36 AM
enjoyed reading today...sounds like fun.
Flach Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 10:12 PM
Ralph, I hope your heart sings often. Keep on cruis'n. Joe
La France Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 8:28 PM
I think this limerick is just wonderful and full of happiness and joyfullness, and pleasure~~
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