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My heart is a Secret Garden

purple, dark red, black,
lovely orange, light yellow,
full of red, rose, white,
some very nice cheerful pink!
heart has a secret garden!!!

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Sara Kendrick

June 11, 2026 at 10:17 AM

I wanted to give you a belated congratulations on your poem being on the winners' list in this contest. Way to go. Somehow, I missed seeing this contest had been judged. Colorful. Sara K.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

June 13, 2026 at 10:35 AM

Thank you very much! Have a nice day :-)

Nette Onclaud

May 21, 2026 at 5:00 PM

the palette of a cheerful heart os brimmimg with col9rs...congrats on yoir wonderful won, abdullah!

Abdullah Alhemaidy

May 21, 2026 at 6:51 PM

Thank you very much! Have a wonderful day!

Silent One

May 21, 2026 at 3:31 PM

Great tanka.. lots of colours in there.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Abdullah Alhemaidy

May 21, 2026 at 6:52 PM

Thank you very much! Blessings :-)

Lin Lane

May 18, 2026 at 8:51 AM

I think your plethora of colors must cover every bloom known to mankind. Perhaps there are exotics of different hues that you're keeping secret, AA.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

May 18, 2026 at 10:00 AM

I think you meant sweet pretty ones! Secret should be secret ;)

Ink Empress

May 18, 2026 at 8:44 AM

Awwn so cute and sweet u wrote for his contest! Love it AA. Well written tanka. Heart definitely has a secret garden Best wishes.:: sending you light always

Abdullah Alhemaidy

May 18, 2026 at 12:16 PM

Lovely of you too :-) Yes heart has its own secrets! Blessings and light back to you. Have a lovely day dear Ink Empress ~ AA