Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Sonnet

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My Heart In Your Homeland

MY HEART IN YOUR HOMELAND


Cupid must have been busy he forgot my heart,
And so instead of a man I've fallen in love,
it is in the mountain ranges my eyes dart.
Sweet, the giddy puffy white clouds above
outstretch his arms to share a shady luff
amongst swarming emerald Spruce that skirt
'round the silky slopes-- like some gloves.
Down quiet is the Loch that stretches its girt
of lucidity allowing passerby's to see pert
Salmon and Trout dancing playfully below,
Delighting both my eyes and so my smart,
a fishing rod, I want to slowly low.
This nature's wonder, I behold for free
soon, I surely want to share with my honeybee.

Some bumpy, some smooth are the long winding roads
One day along my ride, I say hello to this Adonis man
Easy as one, two and three our talks-- climb and flowed
Excluded in my plan, wow! Our love story began...
Cascading soft and longer is our attention span
so velvet then is the glowing blow of our said hello.
No longer, I desire Japan but be home in your land
as to the World's theatre we want to show,
our love like barley seed it sprouted and it grow!
Bright yellow bloom it is while us, a fever red
of fruitful trust and hopeful tomorrows. . .
May we never bleed then later be shred, 
instead, like the Spruce wrap 'round the slopes
together we will hold hands to boldly cope and lope.

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©O. E. Guillermo
 10:31 pm, January 19, 2015

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Paul Callus January 25, 2015 at 12:06 PM Wow! I love this beautiful poem, Olive_eloi! You paint an astounding picture, where love for nature spills over to another more tender love. I have a feeling that cupid knows very well what he's doing!:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 26, 2015 at 8:17 AM thanks much Paul. :)! God bless you.. you really are a keen observant that you didn't miss that from nature to something more.. :)! wow!

Liam Mcdaid January 24, 2015 at 8:58 AM very beautifully painted piece olive excellent pen dear friend Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 26, 2015 at 6:48 AM thanks much Liam.. :) appreciate it.. :D

Anne-Lise Andresen January 22, 2015 at 3:39 AM - Oh, what a beautiful poem Olive - I can see it without the picture - (I can not post images - have tried many times :))) - I wish you a great day! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 22, 2015 at 7:47 PM thanks much Anne Lise.. :)! GOd bless you always.. :)! hugs much. :D!

James Fraser January 20, 2015 at 1:34 PM The slopes of the Ben's skirted in greens. Just like other vistas, Scotland's to be seen. Such is it's beauty it'll delight your eyes, for once you set foot, impressed, so surprised. You don't have to go far, to be in delighted see, walk through Glens of wonderment, with your honeybee. Love this Olive, it's simply oozing images that are simply amazing to view, James :) x :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 21, 2015 at 6:47 AM thanks much James... :)! glad you like my poem.. ;)

Maurice Yvonne January 19, 2015 at 6:18 PM The URL for your picture is in the address bar of your browser. You must copy that URL address and place it where I explained below. I hope this helps but it is difficult to explain without being there to show you!

Maurice Yvonne January 19, 2015 at 6:08 PM When you go to submit a poem there is a box below the poem for writers notes. In that box you will see a much smaller square that has a mountain with sun scene. Push this square. A pop up will occur. In that pop up there is a space that asks for an URL you must place the URL for your picture in this space. I will now explain what an URL is. In your internet browser the top space is your address bar displays the URLS such as http://www.poetrysoup.com. Your picture must be posted on the Internet.

Maurice Yvonne January 19, 2015 at 5:59 PM This write is from the heart. It is very creative and a delight to read. You asked me about posting pictures. I am sorry I took this long to answer. It is not easy to explain but I will do my best. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 21, 2015 at 6:42 AM It's okei Maurice.. :) thanks much.. :)! I appreciate your comments.. :)! God bless you always.. :)!

Tim Smith January 19, 2015 at 2:13 PM You painted a spectacular picture...any nature enthusiast would love to live there...hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 5, 2015 at 7:04 PM thank you Tim.. :) I surely like to live there... :) serene and close to nature is what I really dream as my home.. :) someday, yes someday.. :)!

Indra B Chhetri January 19, 2015 at 9:13 AM Happy endings are splendid. But rare.........fantabulously written .......my all best wishes....Good Luck Olive... Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 21, 2015 at 6:39 AM Thanks much Indra.. :) and God bless you always.. :)