My Heart In Your Homeland

MY HEART IN YOUR HOMELAND Cupid must have been busy he forgot my heart, And so instead of a man I've fallen in love, it is in the mountain ranges my eyes dart. Sweet, the giddy puffy white clouds above outstretch his arms to share a shady luff amongst swarming emerald Spruce that skirt 'round the silky slopes-- like some gloves. Down quiet is the Loch that stretches its girt of lucidity allowing passerby's to see pert Salmon and Trout dancing playfully below, Delighting both my eyes and so my smart, a fishing rod, I want to slowly low. This nature's wonder, I behold for free soon, I surely want to share with my honeybee. Some bumpy, some smooth are the long winding roads One day along my ride, I say hello to this Adonis man Easy as one, two and three our talks-- climb and flowed Excluded in my plan, wow! Our love story began... Cascading soft and longer is our attention span so velvet then is the glowing blow of our said hello. No longer, I desire Japan but be home in your land as to the World's theatre we want to show, our love like barley seed it sprouted and it grow! Bright yellow bloom it is while us, a fever red of fruitful trust and hopeful tomorrows. . . May we never bleed then later be shred, instead, like the Spruce wrap 'round the slopes together we will hold hands to boldly cope and lope. _____________________________________________________________ ©O. E. Guillermo 10:31 pm, January 19, 2015
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Date: 1/25/2015 12:06:00 PM
Wow! I love this beautiful poem, Olive_eloi! You paint an astounding picture, where love for nature spills over to another more tender love. I have a feeling that cupid knows very well what he's doing!:) // paul
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Date: 1/26/2015 8:17:00 AM
thanks much Paul. :)! God bless you.. you really are a keen observant that you didn't miss that from nature to something more.. :)! wow!
Date: 1/24/2015 8:58:00 AM
very beautifully painted piece olive excellent pen dear friend
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Date: 1/26/2015 6:48:00 AM
thanks much Liam.. :) appreciate it.. :D
Date: 1/22/2015 3:39:00 AM
- Oh, what a beautiful poem Olive - I can see it without the picture - (I can not post images - have tried many times :))) - I wish you a great day! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/22/2015 7:47:00 PM
thanks much Anne Lise.. :)! GOd bless you always.. :)! hugs much. :D!
Date: 1/20/2015 1:34:00 PM
The slopes of the Ben's skirted in greens. Just like other vistas, Scotland's to be seen. Such is it's beauty it'll delight your eyes, for once you set foot, impressed, so surprised. You don't have to go far, to be in delighted see, walk through Glens of wonderment, with your honeybee. Love this Olive, it's simply oozing images that are simply amazing to view, James :) x :)
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Date: 1/21/2015 6:47:00 AM
thanks much James... :)! glad you like my poem.. ;)
Date: 1/19/2015 6:18:00 PM
The URL for your picture is in the address bar of your browser. You must copy that URL address and place it where I explained below. I hope this helps but it is difficult to explain without being there to show you!
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Date: 1/19/2015 6:08:00 PM
When you go to submit a poem there is a box below the poem for writers notes. In that box you will see a much smaller square that has a mountain with sun scene. Push this square. A pop up will occur. In that pop up there is a space that asks for an URL you must place the URL for your picture in this space. I will now explain what an URL is. In your internet browser the top space is your address bar displays the URLS such as http://www.poetrysoup.com. Your picture must be posted on the Internet.
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Date: 1/19/2015 5:59:00 PM
This write is from the heart. It is very creative and a delight to read. You asked me about posting pictures. I am sorry I took this long to answer. It is not easy to explain but I will do my best.
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Date: 1/21/2015 6:42:00 AM
It's okei Maurice.. :) thanks much.. :)! I appreciate your comments.. :)! God bless you always.. :)!
Date: 1/19/2015 2:13:00 PM
You painted a spectacular picture...any nature enthusiast would love to live there...hugs Tim
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Date: 3/5/2015 7:04:00 PM
thank you Tim.. :) I surely like to live there... :) serene and close to nature is what I really dream as my home.. :) someday, yes someday.. :)!
Date: 1/19/2015 9:13:00 AM
Happy endings are splendid. But rare.........fantabulously written .......my all best wishes....Good Luck Olive...
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Date: 1/21/2015 6:39:00 AM
Thanks much Indra.. :) and God bless you always.. :)
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