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My Heart Awaits Your Touch

I beat like a bullet through a snowflake, till then my veins stay empty July 12, 2016

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/22/2016 6:51:00 AM

Congrats Sam, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)

Sam Jameson
Date: 7/22/2016 10:00:00 PM

Thank you, Teddy-- much appreciated :)

Angeline Haikutwinkle

Date: 7/21/2016 2:32:00 AM

Truly fascinating

Sam Jameson
Date: 7/21/2016 9:32:00 AM

Thank you, Angeline-- I'm glad the words moved you in some way. Have a great day..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/20/2016 7:33:00 AM

One liners so unique are the ones upon the winners’ page..Glad to see you there..Congrats..Sara

Sam Jameson
Date: 7/20/2016 8:51:00 AM

Thank you kindly, Sara--

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2016 2:41:00 PM

great image for the title you gave it. Congrats.

Sam Jameson
Date: 7/19/2016 10:50:00 PM

I appreciate the feedback and kind remark-- thanks Andrea :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/19/2016 2:04:00 AM

Your bullet hit Silent right between the eyes Sam! Congratulations on your superb fist placement! : )

Sam Jameson
Date: 7/19/2016 10:49:00 PM

What a bit of imagery in that comment, ha! My gun barrels are filled only with words these days-- I find it much more effective for all involved that way :) Thanks, Connie, for the kind compliment on the work-- have a great night!

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/18/2016 10:44:00 AM

Hi Sam, Now that's what I call a "One Liner". Congrats on 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Sam Jameson
Date: 7/18/2016 10:06:00 PM

Very kind of you, Alexis-- glad the words were able to connect and that you enjoyed the read :)

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/18/2016 10:24:00 AM

Great words. Congrats on your 1st place win. :)

Sam Jameson
Date: 7/18/2016 10:05:00 PM

Thank you, Sunita-- much appreciated :)

Jesse Day

Date: 7/17/2016 11:15:00 PM

Congrats on your win in the One-Liner Contest! Jesse

Sam Jameson
Date: 7/17/2016 11:28:00 PM

Thank you, Jesse-- much appreciated!

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/17/2016 10:11:00 PM

Congrats! on first place my friend...god bless...^WW^

Sam Jameson
Date: 7/17/2016 11:27:00 PM

Very kind of you, WW-- appreciate the blessing :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/17/2016 8:53:00 PM

Well deserved win Sam, congratulations...

Sam Jameson
Date: 7/17/2016 11:26:00 PM

Much appreciated, Charlie-- thanks for the handshake.

John Lawless

Date: 7/17/2016 8:44:00 PM

Congrats Sam, very interesting...

Sam Jameson
Date: 7/17/2016 11:26:00 PM

Thank you, John..

Jeremy Proehl

Date: 7/17/2016 7:45:00 PM

Hi Sam, Congrats on winning the Best One Liner contest. Best wishes, JP

Sam Jameson
Date: 7/17/2016 11:25:00 PM

Thank you, JP..

Lu Loo

Date: 7/17/2016 5:39:00 PM

Sam, congrats on your top placement in the one liner contest! :)-luloo

Sam Jameson
Date: 7/17/2016 11:25:00 PM

Thanks, luloo-- I appreciate the kind congrats :)

Tom Arnone

Date: 7/17/2016 5:30:00 PM

Congrats on your # 1 win, Sam. Now, can you please explain its meaning? I can't seem to wrap my head around the line.

Sam Jameson
Date: 7/17/2016 11:23:00 PM

It's symbolism-- the use of imagery to re-enforce one's ultimate desire for another. Read the poem with a mindset of 'with or without you' and you might see more meaning...thanks for the handshake on the win, appreciated.

Seren Roberts

Date: 7/17/2016 5:14:00 PM

congratulations on a fine one liner....Seren

Sam Jameson
Date: 7/17/2016 7:37:00 PM

Much appreciated, Seren--

Skat A

Date: 7/17/2016 4:52:00 PM

Sam, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**

Sam Jameson
Date: 7/17/2016 7:36:00 PM

Thank you, SKAT-- appreciated the warm remarks. Have a great night!