My Heart Awaits Your Touch


I beat like a bullet through a snowflake, till then my veins stay empty


July 12, 2016
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Kimathi Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 6:51 AM
Congrats Sam, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
Jameson Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 10:00 PM
Thank you, Teddy-- much appreciated :)
Haikutwinkle Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 2:32 AM
Truly fascinating
Jameson Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 9:32 AM
Thank you, Angeline-- I'm glad the words moved you in some way. Have a great day..
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 7:33 AM
One liners so unique are the ones upon the winners’ page..Glad to see you there..Congrats..Sara
Jameson Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Thank you kindly, Sara--
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 2:41 PM
great image for the title you gave it. Congrats.
Jameson Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 10:50 PM
I appreciate the feedback and kind remark-- thanks Andrea :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 2:04 AM
Your bullet hit Silent right between the eyes Sam! Congratulations on your superb fist placement! : )
Jameson Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 10:49 PM
What a bit of imagery in that comment, ha! My gun barrels are filled only with words these days-- I find it much more effective for all involved that way :) Thanks, Connie, for the kind compliment on the work-- have a great night!
Y. Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:44 AM
Hi Sam, Now that's what I call a "One Liner". Congrats on 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Jameson Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:06 PM
Very kind of you, Alexis-- glad the words were able to connect and that you enjoyed the read :)
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:24 AM
Great words. Congrats on your 1st place win. :)
Jameson Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:05 PM
Thank you, Sunita-- much appreciated :)
Day Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 11:15 PM
Congrats on your win in the One-Liner Contest! Jesse
Jameson Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 11:28 PM
Thank you, Jesse-- much appreciated!
Warrior Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 10:11 PM
Congrats! on first place my friend...god bless...^WW^
Jameson Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 11:27 PM
Very kind of you, WW-- appreciate the blessing :)
Smith Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 8:53 PM
Well deserved win Sam, congratulations...
Jameson Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 11:26 PM
Much appreciated, Charlie-- thanks for the handshake.
Lawless Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 8:44 PM
Congrats Sam, very interesting...
Jameson Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 11:26 PM
Thank you, John..
Proehl Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 7:45 PM
Hi Sam, Congrats on winning the Best One Liner contest. Best wishes, JP
Jameson Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 11:25 PM
Thank you, JP..
Scars Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Sam, congrats on your top placement in the one liner contest! :)-luloo
Jameson Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 11:25 PM
Thanks, luloo-- I appreciate the kind congrats :)
Arnone Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 5:30 PM
Congrats on your # 1 win, Sam. Now, can you please explain its meaning? I can't seem to wrap my head around the line.
Jameson Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 11:23 PM
It's symbolism-- the use of imagery to re-enforce one's ultimate desire for another. Read the poem with a mindset of 'with or without you' and you might see more meaning...thanks for the handshake on the win, appreciated.
Roberts Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 5:14 PM
congratulations on a fine one liner....Seren
Jameson Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Much appreciated, Seren--
A  Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Sam, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**
Jameson Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 7:36 PM
Thank you, SKAT-- appreciated the warm remarks. Have a great night!
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