My Head Right Now

So many thoughts in my head right now
Trying to make sense of it, but how?
It's crazy to me how life is connected
What I do here, 
Some girl in China probably effected
In an age where we value money over health
It's amazing some live long enough to enjoy wealth

Clothing, real food and equal rights
They should grow from the ground
Bait politics with dollar bills 
NOW it's time to fight

They want water,
They want gas,
They want land,
They want anything with mass

What once was free
They'll treat from disease
After it's been processed and whatever else
Then we'll feel it's worth working for
Somehow we waved our freedom out the door

The importance of education before raising kids
They tell couples they should wait until marriage
You'll do it whether you're married or not, 
Who are they trying to kid?
This is why the single mother needs to work long hours
What happens to her kid is beyond her power
She trusts someone to help
Truth is, 
Hard to trust anyone but yourself
Once that kid is in hand
The dirt that always ran through your hand
Is no longer your land
It's about those 10 fingers and toes
You gotta swallow all you life's woes
So they can grow up to make you proud. 
Improve the world best way they know how

For that child
When you go shop
Is this a place you want them to obtain a job?
Where a shirt with the stores name?
Or would you feel bad for them, a little shame
Then put that dollar away
Walk the extra block or two
Skip the extra day at the cafe
And give it to the ones that would bend over backward
Where you spend you money
You gotta think about all the factors
If you don't want to take the time
That's your choice,
It's fine
If you want to complaint
Just talk in someone else' ear, 
Not mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/30/2013 1:39:00 AM
do you read our feedback? do you need our comments? do you want our friendship? only time and you can tell. . . . this is my first to read and its pretty cool. you have a feisty heart as far as i know, be blessed and strong, calm the storm whoever you are. .
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Date: 7/28/2013 3:37:00 PM
I have been reading your poems as I am able. There was a progression of my perception of you. It went from seeing a girl who was getting out frustration in a clever way, with changes of pace, unexpected lines, and near or no rhymes. It seemed random which was nice, to wonder what I would be reading. I now see you as a messenger with a very important message, exploring new ways to express that message through poetry. I do really enjoy your work.
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Date: 7/28/2013 3:31:00 PM
I often have blamed philosophy on the randomness of my writing or on the no poetic value of some things that I wrote before, and know it must seep into my comments. What I mean is that I really am no judge of poetry, although I have learned much in my seven or so months here. Your work is truly inspirational on many levels, morally, emotionally, and for me even artistically. Keep writing
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