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My Head Is a Pot of Beer

My head is a pot of beer
it is unstable when  filled up
by it overflowing beer pours
a hole for alcohol entry it has
when it boils, I fight, insult
in anger it leads me to disorder
when weak, orders me to sleep
I hate loving the pot of beer!
but, what can I do after all?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 5:04 PM
A beautiful poem indeed! I love your use of rhetorical question in the last line.
Ochwo-Oburu Avatar
June 2, 2017 at 5:47 AM
Thanks Gideon, and I am exited about your come back!!!
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