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My Head Is a Pot of Beer

My head is a pot of beer it is unstable when filled up by it overflowing beer pours a hole for alcohol entry it has when it boils, I fight, insult in anger it leads me to disorder when weak, orders me to sleep I hate loving the pot of beer! but, what can I do after all?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/1/2017 5:04:00 PM
A beautiful poem indeed! I love your use of rhetorical question in the last line.
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Solomon Ochwo-Oburu
Date: 6/2/2017 5:47:00 AM
Thanks Gideon, and I am exited about your come back!!!

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