My Happy Pretend

Let me pretend my way, 
to a happy beginning.
Where the fabric of life,
was thick and not thinning.
A time and a place,
with a loving warm feeling.
A super fantastic life,
that was perfectly appealing.

Where my days were exquisite,
like lines to a "Hallmark" poem.
Everything so perfect,
our house was a home.
Time to be a gleeful child,
daddy left me alone.
My sins weren't so many,
I didn't need to atone.

Days warm and special,
from the very start.
A beautiful life,
imitation of art.
We each were so loving,
that was the best part.
Days filled with happy,
never a broken heart.

Pretending doesn't work,
so I'll just try and be.
Look past my own surfaces
and then I might see.
Beginnings aren't endings,
my God has blessed me.
Forgiven and forgiving,
from the past I'm set free!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sands Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 2:13 PM
Richard. I really can identify with this and it is very good!
La France Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 6:00 PM
Richard, this was a very meaningful write and thought provoking and I am liking it 7 ~
Lamoureux Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 6:03 PM
Thanks Constance.
Hicks Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 10:06 AM
Another super-thoughtful piece, reminiscent of your poem In A Perfect World! It is great for us that beginnings are not endings ... if they were our hope would be slim at best! Hallmark cards are overrated...
Lamoureux Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 6:03 PM
Thanks Timothy!
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February 6, 2016 at 9:40 AM
AWESOME POEM!!!! Beautiful words...I can like most relate I've been at the top of my mountain but I've also been at the bottom. It can be hard to get back up. Just know that no matter how bad things seem...YOU CAN SUCCEED!!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 6:04 PM
So true!
Vaso Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 2:39 PM
I found this to be so uplifting and positive, great poem Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 6:04 PM
Thanks Arthur.
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January 13, 2016 at 5:52 AM
How beautiful the dawn of life may appear, especially when we have never experienced the burning noon and the darkening evening of our life! Beautiful writing that pacifies the soul, dear Richard!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 6:48 AM
Thanks Demetrios, we do not have to wear the rags from our past for we are children of The King.
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January 12, 2016 at 2:36 PM
yes, better to just simply be honest and true to one's self, rich.. this is a heartfelt, beautiful piece.. huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 6:51 AM
Thanks Nette, I have much to be thankful for.
Artis Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 1:23 PM
I always relate to your poems, dear Richard. This one was no different. I understand exactly what you're talking about it. Beautifully expressed and written:) +7
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 6:52 AM
Good morning Ellis, thanks for such a thoughtful comment and visit.
Manassian Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 1:12 PM
:) Lovely
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 6:53 AM
Thanks Eileen, hugs Rick.
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January 12, 2016 at 1:04 PM
- Lovely - Childhood times have their memories for everyone, which we take with us throughout life..... both good and bad - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 6:54 AM
She true, thanks for visiting Anne Lise.
Sage Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:15 AM
lovely poem Richard...best wishes
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 6:55 AM
Thanks for being the first to comment. Much appreciated.
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