Jan Allison Poet Sonnet

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My Happy Muse Bites Back

Listen up guys I have got some news
This is the latest gossip about my muse
She threw her dummy out of the pram
Sometimes she is such a stroppy madam!

She didn’t mean to cause such great alarm
My ‘Bite Me’ poem didn't mean any harm
I agree it’s not my normal cheerful style
But my muse changes once in a while

I have to go with the flow of my pen
It catches me unawares every now and then 
I hope that I have cleared up any doubt
My vitriolic muse has been given a clout

So humourous muse is back, she’s here to stay
My deep dark muse is on an extended holiday!

To fully understand this you need to have read my 'Bite me Bite me poem http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/bite_me,_bite_me_678663

1st June 2015

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Robert Lindley July 12, 2015 at 2:22 PM I like the dark and the cheerful poems both. You excel at both my friend. Always a pleasure to read your poems! A7.. Jan Allison July 12, 2015 at 2:27 PM Thanks Robert my muse did desert me totally recently and I didn't even log on the site in nearly 2 weeks but I now know whatever the issues in my life I must keep writing:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez June 3, 2015 at 5:45 AM Now, this is more like you! lol! hugs! :-) Jan Allison June 3, 2015 at 7:22 AM I think people were shocked by the bite me poem Kim but I can only blame my muse ! Hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux June 2, 2015 at 7:28 AM This is fun, I will go back to give you a bite! Jan Allison June 2, 2015 at 7:36 AM LOl Aww thanks Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie June 1, 2015 at 7:21 PM G'day Jan... I really enjoyed your explosive poem 'bite me.' You did what a poet does... write for other people to relate to the topic. Always reckoned that you hadn't escaped from the funny farm - Lindsay Jan Allison June 2, 2015 at 12:50 AM They may catch up with me - round me up and throw away the key Lindsay - am currently on the run - shhh don't tell anyone:-) Hugs Jan xx

Duke Beaufort June 1, 2015 at 6:43 PM Wah! We like the deep dark one anytime. In fact we like all the things you write. The dark one was funny in its own right. All forms of expression from you are just the best. The dark one may be away for a while (but she is always in there somewhere). Anytime she wants to come out--she is welcome! Jan Allison June 2, 2015 at 12:48 AM Thanks Duke - I blame my muse totally shes a strange character lol:-) hugs jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter June 1, 2015 at 5:41 PM Very nice pen Jan!So your dark muse is on vacation, good! and the funny one is in and back again and that's great to hear my dear friend, lol..Well, this is more you anyway Jan...lol..I like this piece alot and it made me smile today, some that I need a lot lately more than ever, youre so hilarious.Love the pic too!:) A 7! I truly enjoyed it! Thank you for visiting my pages.Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light!God bless you! Hugs!:)D. Jan Allison June 1, 2015 at 5:54 PM Thanks Dorian the other poem was filled with vitriol - purely for the contest but i think it shocked people I could write like that lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso June 1, 2015 at 5:17 PM You just keep getting biter and biter, ops I mean better and better! Jan Allison June 1, 2015 at 5:21 PM lol thank you my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus June 1, 2015 at 5:15 PM I suppose this is a kind of disclaimer(?) It is fine to throw the dummy out of the pram once in a while; some things spill out of a sub-conscience; a bit of a slam makes for positive therapy. Hugs // paul Jan Allison June 1, 2015 at 5:21 PM Yes definitely a discalimer Paul - I am just defending my muse :-) Hugs Jan xx