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My Happy Christmas Present

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Wrapped With thought, One present ... Meant just for me, And arranged lovingly under the tree. So pretty, tied bright with ribbons and bows ... It's all I want This wintry Christmas - You. You, Alone ... Velvet skin, Bow lips, teasing ... Ribbons of silken tresses decorate ... Oh, what wondrous magic must lay inside! Yet sweeter, still, To open Very ... Slow. Yet, Question - Where to start? Ah, choice, divine! Yes, the trimmings are exquisite, indeed ... But, oh, the warm yuletide treasure within! Time to unwrap My Christmas Angel ... You. * FOURTH PLACE in the "It's Christmas Time Again" Poetry Contest, Broken Wings, Sponsor. *

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Lu Loo
Date: 12/20/2017 11:01:00 AM
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so beautiful dear Greg! You have such a way with words, congrats! :)-luloo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2017 1:04:00 PM
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You're very kind, Luloo, thank you so much! <3
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/20/2017 1:47:00 AM
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Congratulations, Greg on your win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2017 1:03:00 PM
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Thank you, Subimal.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/19/2017 12:31:00 PM
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Greg, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely romantic write !
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/19/2017 8:44:00 PM
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Thank you, Constance ... much appreciated.
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James Inman
Date: 12/19/2017 8:05:00 AM
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A sensual write Gregory, invoking some beautiful thoughts that made me smile.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/19/2017 8:43:00 PM
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Thanks so much, James, I so appreciate the kindness! :-)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/17/2017 10:31:00 AM
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This is very sexy! And yet evokes the true Christmas spirit-- in the love that passes all understanding...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/17/2017 10:16:00 PM
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Well-said, LJ, and thank you so much ... I'm so glad you liked it, my friend! :-)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/16/2017 8:18:00 PM
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I absolutely love this, Gregory. FAVE
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/17/2017 10:15:00 PM
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That's very sweet of you, Andrea, and I thank you sincerely ... blessings, dear friend! <3
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/16/2017 9:43:00 AM
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SO beautiful and romantic, Greg! Janice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/17/2017 10:15:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Janice, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :-)

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