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My Halloween Demise

When I finally met St Peter at the Gate
He politely asked me if I would wait..
He thought he should ask  God
If he should let in this old broad..
Normally I would never have passed,
But my devil costume was such a blast.....


For Tony's contest..

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2010

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/24/2010 10:08:00 PM PS. Yea, that Ricky Adams doesn't know what he missed out on. I bet he married a shrew. ahhaha. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/24/2010 10:07:00 PM Ah, this is cute, Barbara!! What a unique way to enter the contest. Is it for that heaven contest. That one has me stumped!(I said that about the tree stump contest too. haha, and I finally did one anyway) Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 10/24/2010 6:20:00 PM funny... glad God has a sense of humor!! Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 10/23/2010 3:07:00 PM I love this humourous Rhyme, Barbara. I know it will be one of the winners! Hope all is well.. Love, Audrey Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/23/2010 2:39:00 PM Very humorous write for the contest. Good luck, barbara. Nice title Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 10/23/2010 12:15:00 PM love it, just love it, good luck in the contest, mine involves a devil costume too, but its terribly long winded I think Login to Reply

Randall Smith Date: 10/23/2010 11:56:00 AM This really made me laugh....not a chuckle...or a gaff...but a really nice belly laugh....Thanks....Randall Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 10/23/2010 11:56:00 AM Ha ha, I'm now picturing you in a nifty little devil costume Barbara. Nice one and good luck in Tony's contest >> James Login to Reply