Hugo Sarvida Jr. Poet Free verse

My Guage Gaze In Between

My gaze is high up above
    black as it can be. 
Every stars in the sky
   are all my tears, 
Hung in there patiently
   waiting to fall. 
In joy and sadness always
   come unexpectedly,
Specially when heart is weary
   and mind is blowingly blank.
But these stars so heavy
   like a world carrying my back.
The annoying background
   adds a long look of doubts,
Straight to the road I trod 
   wagging foot to step in. 
The system of this world sigh
   me in courage to do full force. 
Loading success is a waiting game
   of triumph to adversities, 
Resting below my knees
   is the summation of what's life ahead.

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Darlene De Beaulieu September 26, 2025 at 12:40 PM Hello Hugo, is this what you gaze from up above? Wow! These are many to gaze. Love you more. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu October 3, 2025 at 10:54 AM Hello Hugo, So how does am person prepare for the eternal insurance to be with the Father? Looking up to Heaven I will do more often. Much love here. /Darlene/ Hugo Sarvida Jr. October 2, 2025 at 11:04 PM Hello beautiful Darlene. Heads up doesn't talk only good pride. It also mean looking up heaven's above where our destiny awaits. Life is temporal and passing. It's best to prepare our eternal insurance to be with the Father Almighty now than regret later. The wise knows the counsels of God's. Much love here, Darlene./Hugo.