My Greenest Heaven

Humbled I am by all this glory that I see.
Such gifts are wrought with every flower-every tree.

Across the way those hills seclude so many creatures.
Far as one can gaze such wealth of nature's features.

Greenery and color shared create such bliss.
Tapestry of peace and joy- nothing's amiss.

Longing for the hills when I have gone away.
Captured thus I never want again to stray.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 7:47 PM
congrats on a beautiful win, Deb. Hugs.. Arlene
Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 3:45 PM
So beautiful. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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July 8, 2014 at 11:34 PM
Deb, the hills are alive with poetry, that's how it goes. Congratulations, on your awesome win. Love Linda
A. Sharma Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 2:45 AM
Beautifully penned Deb,, loved ur write,, congrats on win!
Thirtyseven Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 8:54 PM
You capture your attachment to home and your hills well here. What a pleasure to read. Thank you for entering my competition.
Gorelick Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 8:15 PM
I long for the hills too..very nice and congrats. BG
Callus Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 5:10 PM
Very lovely write, Deb; enjoyed the beauty of your hills; love the ending line. Congrats on your win. // paul
Gibson Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 11:31 AM
Deb, enjoyed this...I am from the hills and the hills are in me. When away for awhile, I long just to see them again. Congratulations on your placement.
Nance Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 7:26 PM
The wealth of natures features! oh perfect, what a smile this beauty of a poem brought to my face. Great words :)
Dey Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 12:10 PM
Well penned dear! Love your comment on my poem ...Thanks.
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