My Greek God

Trying To Join My Pathway To A Greek God

16 years old and full of hope, it's 1977
I began my journey to college by bus
From a sleepy little village in Devon
Excited new students jumping on board
But then, I was transported to heaven

A gorgeous young man with sun kissed hair
Sat down beside me, after paying his fare
He had a swimmers' physique with golden tan
Surely a Greek God and not merely a man?

His Summer was spent on the River Teign
Which had bestowed him a body so very lean,
Broad shoulder muscles filled out his shirt,
I do hope at college they'll teach me to flirt!

The next morning I save him a seat and then wait
Alas it stayed empty as he preferred Kate,
The natural blonde with a model's figure,
Oh how I wished that I had grown bigger!

On icy mornings he even gave her his jumper
I wished I could wear it, and prayed that he'd dump her
But he never did, and my college course finished
Our pathways parted, and my love diminished

Years and years later in 2002,
When I was selling the tickets to enter the zoo
A man who was next, he asked for a single
My heart did a skip, and a thump and a tingle

There was something about him that I recognised
Yes, it was my Greek God, I remembered those eyes!
But nothing else I could see was remotely the same
No muscles, no shoulders, and no hair to tame

He wore a Man United shirt, stretched over his tum,
Covered in tattoo's even one that said 'mum'
His flip flops worn flat under his weight
Three quarter length shorts and a shuffling gait

That was the boy that had made my heart pine?
He had chosen a pathway so different to mine
I chuckled to myself and sighed with relief,
To be happily married to a man with some teeth!


Cheryl Darby 19th April 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/12/2015 12:47:00 PM
Thanks for sharing your talent, welcome to the soup.
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Date: 6/15/2015 1:37:00 AM
Cheryl, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/15/2015 3:05:00 AM
Hello SKAT, Thank you for your kind comments and welcoming words! I live in Devon, UK and have only just started writing poetry at the age of 54! I was widowed 2 years ago and I befriended a lady, who lives near me, when she was suddenly widowed recently. Gloria writes humorous verse and turns her poems into books which she sells to raise funds for for a local hospice. She persuaded me to join a local poetry group and so I am a 'late starter'. Cheryl
Date: 6/14/2015 11:44:00 PM
Cheryl, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/15/2015 3:07:00 AM
Thank you Linda, your message was so friendly and welcoming! I am looking forward to getting to know 'PoetrySoup', thank you again, Cheryl
Date: 6/14/2015 2:41:00 PM
- Welcome to P -Soup, Cheryl :) - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I see you have already posted several poems - Enjoy a place with many different "poets" - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/15/2015 3:08:00 AM
Hello Anne-Lise, thank you for your kind comments and welcome, I am very new to writing poetry, a 'late starter' at 54 years old! Cheryl
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