My Grandmother-W

As a kid I was fascinated to the gold ring of my grandma,
I used to play with it when she would cuddle me in her lap
As I grew up, got more introvert sitting alone as if in trauma.

The reason was ardent desire to get admission in university
Though my father with little means was trying hard with hope
And to my surprise my father managed even in the adversity.

One day received urgent call from my father to come home
As I entered, saw grandma on the bed with her palm clap
With tears in eyes between her palms she took my palm.

She said:” When wind blows, bent down as do the plants”
I joined her, "Surrender, ride it, lift your head high as it’ll stop”
I said, “Since you taught the refrains, they’re in my prayers”

She breathed her last before I could further say my words
Leaving blue sapphire ring- a symbolic message of hope
That Saturn is a good teacher but bad master for Libras.

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*I still wear that blue sapphire gem ring when I am running the period 
and sub-period of Saturn astrologically.
I hope Andrea reads this as she has deep interest in astrology.

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Second place win in:
Contest: Last words to a loved one sponsored by Gareth James
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Taylor Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 8:30 AM
Congrats, DR Ram. Excellent tribute. Very touching memory. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Ralph
Brown Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 4:22 AM
Congratulations on your win in Gareth James's contest "Last Words To A Loved One" Dr. Ram. Love, Carol
Muzzey Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 9:35 AM
A wonderful second place win with this lovely write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Falotico Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 10:59 AM
A beautiful tribute my friend... This is an excellent write..well done
James Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 2:26 AM
Congrats, Dr. So many poems i judged could have all rated top spot. Well written and moving
Onclaud Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 12:47 AM
nostalgia at its best, dr. ram.. congrats for raking high in the contest!
Beck Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 12:35 AM
Dr Ram again your poem expresses a personal involvement with family and people in general which lends your poems a quality which makes them extemely pleasant to read....satisfying....sincerely ...Syd
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January 11, 2011 at 11:15 PM
Congratulations to you too, Dr. Ram!!! Just a beautiful poem written by a talented poet. All the very best to you! iolanda
Mannan Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 8:01 PM
This was very touching. A well deserved win Dr. Ram. Many congratulations.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 5:52 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on another well deserved top ten win for this awesome contest my friend.. a very touching and moving entry ... enjoy your top spot with luv..
Devonshire Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 4:13 PM
Big congratulations on taking second place with this heartfelt poem, Dr. Ram! Love, Carolyn
Pettit Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 4:18 PM
This one looks like a strong entry for the competition. Good luck with this one.
Larson Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 10:05 AM
Dr. Mehta ~ I remember my Gramother also, and have her real gold from the Black Hills, and a pearl broach. I keep this in my Communion Tray, and think of her each time, I personally take the bread and wine from home. She also asked me to choose something from her vanity, when I cared for her on sick bed, last days. It was the broach! Till now, had never known of anyone else this sentimental. God love you!
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January 5, 2011 at 12:05 PM
Though I would never have thought of you as an introvert, your love for your grandmother is rekindled each time you look at her beautiful ring. I'm so glad you managed to get the education you wanted so much, Dr. Ram. You are an inspiration to many of us here. Love and best wishes in Gareth's contest with this beautiful poem, Carolyn
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January 5, 2011 at 10:15 AM
Hello Dr. Mehta, Again, the more I read from you, the more I understand and want to know more. This is so moving and such a heart felt story. Thank you for sharing this with us. As Always, Shar
Docherty Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 12:24 AM
A touching and dedicative write of one treasured, and a gift which will hold you close to your grandmothers ideals in troubled times. Alll the best in the contest and Happy New Year! Thanking you for your ever welcome comments!
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 5:24 PM
Dr. Ram, this is lovely. I particularly enjoyed the fourth stanza where and the words you said to her in response to her refrain. Do you really do that? Wear the ring when you are in Saturn? I do not know enough about astrology to do stuff like that! Very interesting. I think you are even more interested in astrology than I am! Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 4:40 PM
Most touching piece Dr. Ram.. a beautiful story of bonding between grandmother and child so attached to her... I still wear my Mother's wedding ring set on my right hand that my Dad gave her to keep them both close to me always... a treasured piece and good luck in the contest ... winner .. for certain my friend.. with luv and emotion....
Maverick Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 3:52 PM
very touching ephitet to your grandmother Dr Ram.
Onclaud Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 12:34 PM
i like the way tender words were strewn together to capture the very essence of your grandmother's beauty... i know the sapphire ring will give you much luck in the contest, dr, ram.. and thanks for appreciating my piece for you in the "wreath" feat... all the best!:) nette
Kendrick Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 8:09 AM
Good one with so much emotion..Your grandmother must have been a very special lady..Good luck in the contest..Your work reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by to read my work..Your comments always encourage me to continue to pen lines..Sara
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January 4, 2011 at 7:15 AM
Dr. Mehta The ring is ( to me ) symbalic as in eternity. No beginning and no end of you and your precious grandmother's love for one another. Beautiful sentiments. She is with you every time she is in your thoughts, loving you still. Thanks for sharing such a stately, sweet memory with all of us. It may have been your grandmother's last breath but her words will forever speak to you.
Horsman Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 7:09 AM
This is a wonderful memory of your Grandma, and as usual i learn't something from you, thank you. Harry
La France Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 6:35 AM
This is "so beautifiul" Ram, so very visual, I could actually see you bending down as your Grandmother said these words to you~~
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