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M e, I'm way up north and you born down south, Y our proud dad and mom, and your grandma, G randma said your digits, eyes, nose + mouth, R osy were you from head to toes, and cute too, A nd then you grew, still slim, but getting cuter, N ow you were starting school, my how time fly, D addy busy working, finding the time when can, D addy work, like us, we too still young to work, A nd he tells us how you went from cute, to boys, U nlike parents, they worry but your grades great, G raduating, boyfriend, tons of friends, and all us, H ave a job while going to the Uni, your own place, T old your dad not to worry, and you'll be just fine, E fforts paid off as your modeling career pays bills, R emember, need $$, call your father, then call us. ***Her dad is the little one on my lap in my profile picture Date: 05/30/2019

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Date: 8/31/2019 1:47:00 AM
This is so sweet William. I love being a grandmother. I have more time and more patience and less stress to enjoy them. I love your photo with your son. Is the model in the photo your granddaughter? She is quite stunning. xxoo
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Date: 8/31/2019 1:52:00 AM
Uncanny how they do photo shoots--totally different look--touch-ups last an hour--REALLY! That's the daddy sitting on my lap.

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