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My Golden Dream

My darling sweet, wake to me! A beautiful melody is your morning treat. Wake and hear the euphony coming from a leafy tree. Look, my darling sweet, and a goldfinch you will see. In his trill is poetry sounding joy replete. Hasten to your window seat. Look outside and see dawn greet you with its first ray. Rise, my love, and with bare feet, through the fields of amber wheat we will run today. Come follow me. I entreat you. Hasten, love; time is fleet. Darling, don’t delay! There is nothing to waylay us. This is a golden day. Where marigolds gleam in the meadow we will play. Then down where the cattails sway by a sun-lit stream, all the afternoon, we’ll stay. Come with me, love. Come away to my golden dream. 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/13/2023 9:44:00 AM
A golden dream it is Andrea - one I don't want to wake up from in the dawn. Thank you for bringing this lovely poem of a romantic dream back so we can dream it al over again with you! Congrats and high fives! Easter season blessings!
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Date: 3/23/2023 4:46:00 AM
Your poem is a beautiful celebration of love and nature, and it left me feeling uplifted and inspired. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/22/2023 8:16:00 PM
"through the fields of amber wheat we will run today", "Come with me, love. Come away to my golden dream" - beautifully romantic. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/6/2014 7:34:00 AM
Andrea So passionately sweet and caring like a lovers dream in a serene and calming place. Thank you for the great comment on my Dunce poem.
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Date: 8/10/2012 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Virelai" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2012 4:29:00 PM
FANTASTIC!! My favorite on the winner's list...congrats, Andrea!! Love and Blessings, Rhpnda
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Date: 8/7/2012 11:28:00 AM
NOW...I am wondering what this poem is doing here at almost bottom of the list!!A big congrats to you Andrea!!
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:41:00 AM
very pretty. congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:36:00 AM
Always a pleasure to see your name in the winners circle (list). Congratulations.
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:18:00 AM
a sweet romantic plea, andie... congrats on your awesome award!..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/7/2012 8:02:00 AM
lovely write..congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 8/7/2012 5:48:00 AM
congratulations on this super win Andy revised or not its a good one xx
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Date: 8/7/2012 4:18:00 AM
Andrea big congrats on your winning poem, I must have missed the original, I like the journey you took us on, well done...David
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Date: 7/10/2012 2:26:00 PM
This a jem of a write Andrea. I feel like i am in the dream with you running thru the amber wheat fields and seeing this golden day with you. Just an observer of it. AWESOME write and good luck in the contest. Have not even had time to look what contests are running. At the shop today and thank goodness Ryan did not shut down the computer because I don't know his password. love phyl
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Date: 7/3/2012 6:47:00 AM
always perfection Andrea.. this form was hard but u penned a beauty and made it appear easily done..luv.. best wishes in contet .. a top notch creatiion ..
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Date: 7/2/2012 8:41:00 AM
Good morning the lovely Andrea, NATHAN & I.. enjoyed his birthday... Today has been a slow day at the restuarant. But, it is a good thing, gives me time to play here on the soup... did you read Nathans silly senryu... he's a nut head sometimes... tobad I love my nut head...lol... thank you for stopping by... xox..pd
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Date: 7/2/2012 8:34:00 AM
good luck in the contest you should hit payday with this old scholl homage (i think that is the phrase i am looking for)
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Date: 7/1/2012 6:27:00 PM
"There's a bright golden haze on the meadow" - your poems reminds me of that line from Oklahoma. Fine work1 Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/1/2012 3:44:00 PM
really full and flowing Andrea; a treat to read this was; wishing you a top win tonight..." yours Joe..)
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Date: 7/1/2012 2:59:00 PM
Here comes the sun, dadududu. Here comes the sun, and Iii say, It's alright. dadududududududududududududududu. :)
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Date: 7/1/2012 10:51:00 AM
awesome virelai, Andrea. A sure winner here. Many congrats on your wins, my friend : )
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Date: 7/1/2012 8:11:00 AM
i think you got it, andie... sweet feel here!..:) best wishes and hugggs!.. am still editing mine..:)
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Date: 7/1/2012 7:24:00 AM
This is so good Andrea ! Words of yore, words that will last and, as you have shown, will never leave the lips and hearts of the poet ! Have a wonderful week dear poet....much love, james
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Date: 7/1/2012 6:12:00 AM
Very beautiful art, Andrea! Jimbo
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Date: 7/1/2012 3:30:00 AM
Yeahhh!
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