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My God

My God ... I’m ancient now I’m ever so old, As if I’m a story forever told. Her calls a lasting bagpiped tune, Carried upon the mist and moon. To my left the water runs deep, ‘n to my right the cliffs so steep. I walk the night with eyes that seek, Her slippery path a watery streak. The movement itself is subtle and faint. There is a sense of silent restraint. The light is dim, so I can only guess. And then a flash, my God ... my Ness!

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Date: 2/1/2018 2:55:00 PM
Wow Jerry, your brilliant poem lingers on in memory! It so impresses emotions that run deep, especially for those of us with close ancestry to the island. I absolutely love your entry. Congratulations on your most deserving second placement. A Fave for me! : )
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/1/2018 3:21:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 1/31/2018 4:23:00 PM
Nice poem, Jerry. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/1/2018 3:21:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 1/31/2018 3:00:00 PM
Congrats Jerry, much enjoyed :)
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/1/2018 3:22:00 PM
Thanks, Gary Smith from USNA?
Date: 1/31/2018 2:36:00 PM
My God, Jerry, what a moving poem. Somehow goes right to the heart. I love it and just had to FAVE it! Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/1/2018 3:23:00 PM
Thank you so much
Date: 1/31/2018 12:23:00 PM
Awesome write, Jerry, congratulation on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/1/2018 3:24:00 PM
Thanks Eve
Date: 1/31/2018 12:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/1/2018 3:24:00 PM
Thank You

Book: Shattered Sighs