My Gift From On High

My gift from on high


God only knows where you came from, your shining silhouette follows you,
I have been so blessed- I'll never take for granted, my gift from on high



 
January 03,2020
John Derek Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gauthier Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 12:29 AM
Lovely prayer-like poem. Beautifully penned, John.
Hamilton Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 10:38 AM
thanks Line it's short but sweet!
Aurora Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 4:18 PM
Wow this is very sweet. I find these short forms difficult but you have really summed it up well here. Beautiful! Happy New Year to you and your precious gift :)
Hamilton Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 5:20 PM
Thanks MA, I too have difficulty with short writes, but somehow this one came easy. My muse is on standby so I'm trying to prod it along by writing these short ones. Hopefully I'll come up with a longer one soon!
Chiri Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 5:17 AM
I see congrats are in order John! I can see it was a very well deserved win! Such beauty in your words!;)
Hamilton Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 9:11 AM
Thanks Brenda
Gauthier Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 8:04 PM
Lovely poem of appreciation, John. Congrats on your podium finish.
Hamilton Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 9:06 PM
Thanks Line I'm glad you came by and enjoyed it!
Ligon Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 4:24 PM
This is lovely. Congrats!
Hamilton Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 5:38 PM
Thanks Juliet, nice of you to pass by!
Sands Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 4:45 PM
I love this John. Gratitude is the key! Excellent. A FAV :)
Hamilton Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 8:06 AM
Thanks so much Heidi especially for the fave. You're right gratitude fosters happiness and I am grateful!
Devonshire Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 2:36 PM
Wow! It's wonderful to know there are men who feel this way. Taking each other for granted is the death knell in many relationships. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Carolyn
Hamilton Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 2:58 PM
Thanks Carolyn I thought you would like this one, glad you left such a nice comment!
La France Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 11:33 PM
John, wonderfully penned, well done and congratulations _ Constance
Hamilton Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 9:18 AM
Thanks Constance glad you liked it!
Callus Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 9:28 AM
Lovely sentiments, John. Love is not to be taken for granted! Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul
Hamilton Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 12:13 PM
Thanks Paul for stopping by, glad you liked it!
Roper Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 9:49 PM
Congratulations on your in Silent One's contest. Hugs Eve
Hamilton Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 12:12 PM
Thanks Eve I do appreciate it,
 Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 8:00 PM
Bravo. Congtats
Hamilton Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 12:12 PM
Thanks, not sure who you are, but I thank you for your visit!
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 5:57 PM
this is such a sweet tribute, John. Congrats on the win
Hamilton Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 5:59 PM
Thanks Andrea, I really liked yours!
Pandit Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 4:29 PM
Such an awesome tribute to gift of love --so lovingly expressed! Congrats John on your splendid win.
Hamilton Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 4:34 PM
Thanks Vijay glad you liked it!
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 1:38 PM
- A beautiful ku duet, John :) - Congratulations on a 2st place in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 1:45 PM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise
Adams Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 11:35 AM
so glad to see this on the winner's list... congratulations John... hugs
Hamilton Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 11:51 AM
Thanks Sandy, I don't enter many contests, glad you and the sponsor liked this one!
Somadas Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 10:54 AM
Sweet..Congrats on your placement...
Hamilton Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 11:50 AM
Thanks Jenish
May Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 10:31 AM
Beautifully expressed John, Congrats on your win
Hamilton Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 11:50 AM
Thanks Joseph, glad you liked it!
Y. Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 9:04 AM
Hi John, You have expressed how grateful you are very well in two lines. May you always feel like this. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.Have wonderful day and Happy New Year:-) Alexis
Hamilton Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 11:49 AM
Thanks Alexis, I'm glad you came by and liked it enough to leave a comment. Let's hope for a good year!
One Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 7:16 AM
we can never take such a gift for granted, sadly some do... nice one John.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
Hamilton Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 11:48 AM
Thanks SO for a nice placement, glad you liked it!
Dawson Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 10:27 PM
So lovely!
Hamilton Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 11:47 AM
Thanks J.R welcome to my page!
Nicole Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 9:17 PM
May you always be blessed. This is so beautiful and uplifting. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. :) Brandy
Hamilton Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 11:47 AM
Thanks Brandy
Lamoureux Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 7:46 PM
I like how you expressed yours. Good luck in the contest. ;0)
Hamilton Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 8:42 PM
Thanks Rick I haven't entered a Silent One's contest in a long while so let's see what happens!
Adams Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 4:55 PM
you were clearly sent an angel to love... beautifully penned John... best wishes in the contest... hugs
Hamilton Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 5:23 PM
Thanks Sandy, she's definitely my gift from above! Thanks for your kind comment and visit!
Devonshire Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 4:35 PM
If you hold onto these feelings, you and your mate will be happy forever, John. Best wishes in Silent One's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Hamilton Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 5:22 PM
Thanks Carolyn, she's definitely a keeper!
Green Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 4:23 PM
Beautifully expressed my friend. It is obvious this came from a very deep place in your heart. Best wishes in the contest.
Hamilton Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 5:22 PM
Thanks so much Chris glad you came by today!
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