Notes About The Poem

Written, August 27, 2026
For The Contest, “Silent Letters and Oxymorons”
Sponsor: Natasha L Scragg 

 

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My Gift- Described Oxymoron-ish

He gave me a gift, terribly good- but it was clearly misunderstood. Good grief, what does it do? looks pretty ugly too! Like huge chunky goggles, there it stood. Deafening silence came over me! Seriously funny, for you see this was his only choice? For me there was no voice? A cruel kindness- how can this be? The sound of silence he broke with shout- Falsely true is what this is about! Awfully good, you see- virtual reality! Definite maybe, you will freak out! Alone together, now bittersweet our short minor crisis, we did meet! In a true fiction world open secrets unfurled! These chunky goggles cannot be beat!
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Rowe Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 4:35 AM
Great job fitting so many oxymorons into such a tight rhyming pattern. One minor observation: Did you mean to bold "pretty ugly" instead of "ugly too"?
Haight Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 6:50 AM
Wow, Jesse, don't know how I miss that! Thank you so much for bringing it to my attention and I have fixed it. And I very much appreciate your visit and uplifting comment too! Sandra👍
Kendrick Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 8:58 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Natasha's contest, a very creative work on your part. Way to go. 👏✍️. Sara K.
Scragg Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 4:14 AM
A very fun and entertaining entry Sandra. I love the humerous presentation of the dilemma you face when receiving a present you don't like ... lol 😂 Then you try it and realise you do... Thank you for sharing this funny write in the contest. 🌸
Haight Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 10:14 AM
Thanks for the unique contest, Natasha. I had fun creating my poem, and thank you so much for my placement. Sandra😊
Rolland Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 2:14 PM
just enjoyed, laughing is vital, thanks poet
Rolland Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 2:14 PM
just enjoyed, laughing is vital, thanks poet
Haight Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 4:24 PM
Thank you, Yann, for your visit and supportive comment! Glad you laughed and enjoyed my poem! 😊
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 12:11 PM
You are a sight to behold. When we first bought this, I was in an aquarium and a great white swam up to my cage…had to throw off the goggles…lol
Haight Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 1:36 PM
Yes, Kim, the visions and sense of being right there are very realistic! Thanks for stopping by to read this! Hugs, Sandra 😂
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