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In dreams she reaches for me, She is me and I am her; We walk a cemetery, And she leads the way. We stand at a mossy tomb, And I see my name engraved; I am her and she is me, But which is living. _________________ November 7, 2015 Dodoitsu

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Date: 11/12/2015 1:12:00 PM
I must leave for a while now. But I shall return to read more and also what new comes forth. This is an echo knowing what I know about you. Your words are the words of dreams and of the subconscious. That is a real poetic talent you have, and you make such a difference. Again, thank-you for being here and bursts of positive energy going out to you (in case you feel something strange and different).
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Constance La France
Date: 11/12/2015 2:08:00 PM
Thanks for you visits and comments Duke, and for the positive energy you are sending my way, you are a very special man, ~
Date: 11/8/2015 4:13:00 PM
Hello BW, I meant to add to my response below that I am "FAVING" your write here too!! (Sorry I forgot to mention this, but now you know!!) Cheers and Best, Gary
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Constance La France
Date: 11/8/2015 4:36:00 PM
oh you are the best, thanks so much for the fav ..
Date: 11/8/2015 4:11:00 PM
Hello BW!! This Dodoitsu is marvelous and spooky for sure. The imagery and message are quite perfect. I really like it!! I wish you the best of luck in the contest. I believe you have a very strong entry here with this write. A Big "7" from me!! Continued Best Wishes!! Gary
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Constance La France
Date: 11/8/2015 4:36:00 PM
Gary, thank you so much for that nice comment and for the big 7, so appreciated
Date: 11/7/2015 8:29:00 PM
fantastic, Constance!! and love the picture.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/8/2015 3:27:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I love that word fantastic
Date: 11/7/2015 1:56:00 PM
This is AMAZING. Such a unique and creative take on this contest! A fav for me :)
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Constance La France
Date: 11/7/2015 2:21:00 PM
Heather, thank you so much for that great comment, appreciate the fav