My Ghostly Doppelganger


In dreams she reaches for me,
She is me and I am her;
We walk a cemetery,
And she leads the way.

We stand at a mossy tomb,
And I see my name engraved;
I am her and she is me,
But which is living.


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November 7, 2015

Dodoitsu

deathdreamdodoitsu

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/12/2015 1:12:00 PM

I must leave for a while now. But I shall return to read more and also what new comes forth. This is an echo knowing what I know about you. Your words are the words of dreams and of the subconscious. That is a real poetic talent you have, and you make such a difference. Again, thank-you for being here and bursts of positive energy going out to you (in case you feel something strange and different).

Constance La France
Date: 11/12/2015 2:08:00 PM

Thanks for you visits and comments Duke, and for the positive energy you are sending my way, you are a very special man, ~

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/8/2015 4:13:00 PM

Hello BW, I meant to add to my response below that I am "FAVING" your write here too!! (Sorry I forgot to mention this, but now you know!!) Cheers and Best, Gary

Constance La France
Date: 11/8/2015 4:36:00 PM

oh you are the best, thanks so much for the fav ..

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/8/2015 4:11:00 PM

Hello BW!! This Dodoitsu is marvelous and spooky for sure. The imagery and message are quite perfect. I really like it!! I wish you the best of luck in the contest. I believe you have a very strong entry here with this write. A Big "7" from me!! Continued Best Wishes!! Gary

Constance La France
Date: 11/8/2015 4:36:00 PM

Gary, thank you so much for that nice comment and for the big 7, so appreciated