My Germ Filled Limerick

My nose is redder than red
The flu has put me in bed
I sniffle and drip
I can’t get a grip
For there’s pure lead in my head

Coughed up a poem or two
That might not make sense to you
The germs and the phlegm
Have covered this gem
Clean it, for it is…true blue!

It’s been a miserable day
Been grumpy all the way
But for this great SOUP
You guys are the scoup
Much better than meds…. I’ll say!

Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/11/2013 3:35:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..I do hope that you have not been sick..I hope that it is just a work from past experience or from seeing someone else sick..I do hope that a virus won't travel over the internet..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2013 3:50:00 PM
Dear Sara...it's truer than true...don't worry..won't pass it to you! ;) Hugs!
Date: 3/10/2013 5:31:00 PM
Get well soon.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2013 7:50:00 AM
Went to university today and taught my classes. It wasn't easy. :( Back in bed now for a bit of a rest. I'm better, thanks! :)
Date: 3/9/2013 5:17:00 PM
Girl; you are good. You can write a poem of anything. Thanks for reading my ABC poem. I made a few mistakes, but I went back and fixed them. I have not been feeling good myself. Eat hot soup and drink hot tea. Lucilla
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/10/2013 12:08:00 AM
Lucilla, dear. I've had to edit umpteen times. That's why I wrote the poem, EDIT EDIT EDIT! My pleasure to read your heartfelt work! Sorry you aren't well, my dear! Do take care, and get better soon! Hugs!
Date: 3/9/2013 4:24:00 PM
This is a funny little tribute to P-Soup... Light reading is much more calming (and less damaging to the body) then meds. Be sure to drink lots of tea and rest often! Love the middle stanza the best.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/10/2013 12:09:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy. I'm trying to get better. This seems to have been the worst bout ever! Glad you liked it! :) Cheers!
Date: 3/9/2013 3:46:00 PM
You're such a funny girl. You had me chuckling all the way through. Well done, Eileen. Pamper your sick body, my friend. My very best to you :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/10/2013 12:39:00 AM
YUP! I try....I'm more intense than funny, but I have my moments! ;) Feeling a bit better now! There is light at the end of the tunnel! Hugs!
Date: 3/9/2013 3:37:00 PM
Cute germy poem....get well...great picture...you are so pretty......don't know how a germ would dare get on you!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/10/2013 12:41:00 AM
Oh Donna...you are so sweet! ;) Glad you like the profile pic! :) I guess I was too attractive for the germs to give me a miss! ;) Love ya!
Date: 3/9/2013 1:47:00 PM
so sorry you're sick, eileen, but glad that you're still able to write! i enjoyed this poem, as i always do your work. feel better!
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Date: 3/9/2013 1:50:00 PM
Oh Ilene....thanks. My immunity seems down lately! I had family come over who were sick. My little sweet niece whom I adore had fever and was coughing. I think all my cuddling...though I was careful...got my sick! Oh well...at least I got to write! Hugs!
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