My Germ Filled Limerick

My nose is redder than red
The flu has put me in bed
I sniffle and drip
I can’t get a grip
For there’s pure lead in my head

Coughed up a poem or two
That might not make sense to you
The germs and the phlegm
Have covered this gem
Clean it, for it is…true blue!

It’s been a miserable day
Been grumpy all the way
But for this great SOUP
You guys are the scoup
Much better than meds…. I’ll say!

Eileen Manassian Ghali
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 3:35 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..I do hope that you have not been sick..I hope that it is just a work from past experience or from seeing someone else sick..I do hope that a virus won't travel over the internet..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Manassian Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 3:50 PM
Dear Sara...it's truer than true...don't worry..won't pass it to you! ;) Hugs!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 5:31 PM
Get well soon.
Manassian Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 7:50 AM
Went to university today and taught my classes. It wasn't easy. :( Back in bed now for a bit of a rest. I'm better, thanks! :)
Carrillo Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 5:17 PM
Girl; you are good. You can write a poem of anything. Thanks for reading my ABC poem. I made a few mistakes, but I went back and fixed them. I have not been feeling good myself. Eat hot soup and drink hot tea. Lucilla
Manassian Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 12:08 AM
Lucilla, dear. I've had to edit umpteen times. That's why I wrote the poem, EDIT EDIT EDIT! My pleasure to read your heartfelt work! Sorry you aren't well, my dear! Do take care, and get better soon! Hugs!
Hicks Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 4:24 PM
This is a funny little tribute to P-Soup... Light reading is much more calming (and less damaging to the body) then meds. Be sure to drink lots of tea and rest often! Love the middle stanza the best.
Manassian Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 12:09 AM
Thanks, Timothy. I'm trying to get better. This seems to have been the worst bout ever! Glad you liked it! :) Cheers!
Hendricks Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 3:46 PM
You're such a funny girl. You had me chuckling all the way through. Well done, Eileen. Pamper your sick body, my friend. My very best to you :)
Manassian Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 12:39 AM
YUP! I try....I'm more intense than funny, but I have my moments! ;) Feeling a bit better now! There is light at the end of the tunnel! Hugs!
Jones Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 3:37 PM
Cute germy poem....get well...great picture...you are so pretty......don't know how a germ would dare get on you!
Manassian Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 12:41 AM
Oh Donna...you are so sweet! ;) Glad you like the profile pic! :) I guess I was too attractive for the germs to give me a miss! ;) Love ya!
Bauer Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 1:47 PM
so sorry you're sick, eileen, but glad that you're still able to write! i enjoyed this poem, as i always do your work. feel better!
Manassian Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 1:50 PM
Oh Ilene....thanks. My immunity seems down lately! I had family come over who were sick. My little sweet niece whom I adore had fever and was coughing. I think all my cuddling...though I was careful...got my sick! Oh well...at least I got to write! Hugs!
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