My Geat Adventure

My great adventure

At the ripe old age of six, I went
With my two young brothers
Aboard the mighty ship, Mooltan
We went on a big adventure
To a land called West Australia
My parents bought the tickets
How excited we all were
To be going across the ocean.
We boarded ship in London town
Oh, what a great adventure.

The docks were called the Tilbury docks
Oh, what a sight we saw
We were so awed by this mighty ship
The excitement filled our souls
We went aboard all filled with joy
And our adventure had begun
We left old Blighty far behind
Went on our merry way
Life was great aboard this ship
We played to our hearts content.

Oh lord we sailed through so many countries
Our little hearts aglow
Shopping from the old bum boats
Oh boy it was such fun
Oh how I loved this ocean air
It made me feel alive
Eventually after five long weeks
Ahead we spied the coastline
‘So this was it’ my young mind said
West Australia was in sight.

Oh, what a lovely sight it was
My heart it really danced
To see those vast, white sandy beaches
It gave me such delight
We were so excited, us three
Our knew life was beginning
And oh it had been quite a trip
I always will recall
These days until the day I die
It was so beautiful.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/25/2014 12:55:00 PM
really very beautiful piece vera most delightful journey golden pen dear friend
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Date: 7/5/2014 12:27:00 AM
I love adventure and you've taken me on two tonight, thank you lady lol. Your discricsions and imagery is very cool. You were a very lucky little girl to see so much and experience these wonderious places as these. I've see them on the travel channel and in books lol love this write lady thanks again for another adventure cheri
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Vera Duggan
Date: 7/8/2014 9:10:00 PM
The only reason I was on this trip I was with Mum and Dad immigrating, so glad we did but it was a wonderful experience, I still remember a lot of it and I was only 6 years old, thank you for reading this Cherl my dear, take care.........Vera............
Date: 6/4/2014 8:42:00 PM
You have recalled these memories with such youthful exuberance and excitement. These voyages of yours were pure joy to read Vera.
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Vera Duggan
Date: 6/5/2014 1:27:00 AM
Thank you Robert, yes I will always have these memories etched in my mind, it was something I would never forget, thank you so much for taking the time to read Take care my friend.............Vera................
Date: 5/23/2014 8:54:00 PM
Another lovely write bout you spectacular adventures.. What a wonderful write. Take care, Jess :)
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Vera Duggan
Date: 5/23/2014 9:13:00 PM
Thank you ever so much Jess. This adventure was my first one and then 13 years later was the other one, I have had a few adventures in my life and now at 71 years of age I am starting another adventure, plenty more to come I hope. Take care.............Vera.............
Date: 5/23/2014 8:32:00 PM
That was an adventure for real. It is so nice to have good memories of our child hood. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/23/2014 11:06:00 PM
Hi Vera, so far I'm doing good. I was very sick a couple of nights ago, but I'm alright now. I still have to wear the life vast.
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Vera Duggan
Date: 5/23/2014 9:10:00 PM
Oh Lucilla thank you so much for taking the time to read, yes it was a great adventure especially through the eyes of a child, funny yesterday I visited my 96 year old mother and reminded her of that trip many years ago and she remembers it like it was yesterday, how are you my dear, take care..........Vera...........
Date: 5/20/2014 6:27:00 PM
Hi Vera, My friend This was enchanting. It kept me close to your journey from the beginning till the end. It sounds delightful where you and Peter live. I like how you describe every great detail. Very nice write:~) Thanks for sharing this wonderful write. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Vera Duggan
Date: 5/20/2014 11:30:00 PM
Hi Deb, thank you so much for your lovely comments, it was lovely journey and thank you for joining me LoL. Yes it is lovely where we live, but I have been better places, I have more or less lived here all my life, I was raised here but Peter wasn't so he loves it more than me, in fact he just loves Australia, take care my friend....Vera..................
Date: 5/20/2014 2:35:00 PM
Dear Vera.how lovely... I am waiting for you to write another wonderful poem... Your poetry booms of love and happiness and a wonderful life.. I love reading it.. Bravo dear Vera.. Brooke
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Vera Duggan
Date: 5/20/2014 11:26:00 PM
Oh Brooke please don't hold your breath waiting for the next one but I have one which has to be tidied up before I put it on, thank you so much for your lovely comment, take care my dear friend........Vera........
Date: 5/19/2014 8:03:00 PM
What a beautiful journey and a wonderful memory...hugs Tim
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Vera Duggan
Date: 5/20/2014 12:39:00 AM
Tim my friend thank you so much for your comment, yes it was a beautiful journey from what I can remember, it was a damn long time ago, but what I do remember will be with me for the rest of my life. Take care............Vera..................
Date: 5/19/2014 7:58:00 PM
I just went on that fantastic voyage with you my friend... And did so without getting seasick! A glorious write on a awesome journey!
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Vera Duggan
Date: 5/20/2014 12:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Robert, it was a fantastic voyage and being so young I didn't get seasick, but when I went back in 1962 aged nineteen I was terribly seasick, but is another story, Take care my friend..........Vera............
Date: 5/19/2014 7:49:00 PM
Oh that sounds amazing! What an adventure, and a treasured memory. Thanks for sharing sweetheart I enjoyed it very much !! :)
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Vera Duggan
Date: 5/20/2014 12:28:00 AM
Casarah, thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment, yes it was quite an adventure it was a wonder I remember it all, it was the best move my parents ever made, Take care...................Vera...........
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