Mohammad Abedin Poet Light Verse

My Garden

I want to make a garden
full of roses
black, white, and pink....

Bees are invited to suck the honey
and to taste
Butterflies are invited to enjoy the colors 
and the smell....
Men are invited to enjoy the glory and glamour
of roses in nature....

Have you ever visited a garden 
full of roses
Have you ever enjoyed 
their colors and smell....

Roses can make you fall in love
They can remove all the distresses of your mind....

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole March 4, 2014 at 11:23 AM Great write, Mohammad! Congratulations on your cute winning poem!!!

Connie Gildersleeve March 3, 2014 at 6:11 PM A wonderful tribute to Linda Marie. Congratulations on your we'll deserved win - Connie Mohammad Abedin March 3, 2014 at 11:08 PM Many thanks

Joyce Johnson March 3, 2014 at 3:40 PM Yes I have a garden full of roses every summer. Not black though. I have never seen a black rose. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce Mohammad Abedin March 3, 2014 at 11:10 PM I saw some black roses. Genetically modified roses... Thanks

Dr.Ram Mehta March 3, 2014 at 1:24 AM Brilliant Ballad! Congrats on the fine win, Mohammad Mohammad Abedin March 3, 2014 at 11:10 PM Many thanks

Kayod5 Kayode March 2, 2014 at 9:23 PM This is simply classic, congrats on the win Mohammad. Mohammad Abedin March 3, 2014 at 11:11 PM thanks

Len Gasun March 2, 2014 at 10:10 AM Congratulations my dear friend Mohammad . Thank you so much for your loving support. More blessings! Love lots, Leonora Mohammad Abedin March 3, 2014 at 11:12 PM Many thanks

Joe Maverick February 15, 2014 at 5:28 PM A most colourful tribute to Linda-Marie Muhammed, congrats..' Mohammad Abedin March 3, 2014 at 11:12 PM Thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2014 at 6:35 AM - First place / gold medal goes to: LINDA MARIE! - Thank you, Mohammad. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Mohammad Abedin March 3, 2014 at 11:13 PM Thanks for precious comments

Dr.Ram Mehta February 15, 2014 at 4:46 AM Lovely tributes paid to Linda Marie and congrats on the win, Mohammad Mohammad Abedin March 3, 2014 at 11:14 PM again hundreds of thanks

Skat A February 15, 2014 at 12:21 AM Mohammad, a wonderful tribute Remembering Linda-Marie: *Our Forever Sweetheart" ~SKAT~ Mohammad Abedin March 3, 2014 at 11:15 PM thanks for a favor.

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2014 at 12:19 AM what a lovely poem to go along with Linda's tribute poems. She loved garden flowers and poems with butterflies. Mohammad Abedin March 3, 2014 at 11:17 PM Thanks Andrea...

Dr.Ram Mehta January 31, 2014 at 8:09 PM Enjoyed the write and congrats on the fine win, Mohammad Mohammad Abedin January 31, 2014 at 10:13 PM Many thanks

Andrea Dietrich January 20, 2014 at 10:46 PM I love this and I LOVE roses. I planted my first ones two years ago and they are amazing flowers! Mohammad Abedin January 21, 2014 at 7:35 AM You have a practical knowledge, I see....

Richard Lamoureux January 20, 2014 at 9:32 AM I enjoyed my stroll through your rose garden. In the last stanza you may wish to remove the word "been" from two lines. Other than that it is a perfect write. Mohammad Abedin January 20, 2014 at 3:29 PM Thanks

Connie Marcum Wong January 20, 2014 at 1:23 AM Soup mail. Roses do express the tenderness of love with their delicate velvity petals and heavenly fragrance as well as having vivid colors. A lovely poem you have created Mohammed. Mohammad Abedin January 20, 2014 at 9:18 AM Many thanks