My Future Self


A photo of my past reveals a pattern
Like a stroll that one would unfold;
Like a one-way forward railroad track,
Portraying rather interesting facts and
Saying to all that, usually, I did not go back.

Unlike God's creation, it was not 'all good';
Nor does it show that every assignment was finished.
By no means was I in any way tarnished and diminished.
Although hard, tiring, and bruising, I learned to strive.
The sunsets inspired me, and sunrises moved me ahead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Jones Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 10:17 PM
Love this as it is so raw and beautifully accepting of self! Good luck in the contest!
Johnson Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 5:16 AM
Thanks, Karen, for your comment and observation.
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