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My Future I Will Take On My Own

I am told; one day I will become a woman I need to prepare for when that day will come When someone will take my hand and care for me Having a family of my own, in charge of running a home I have other views of the woman I want to be My preparations for my future I will take on my own Women are not allowed to take the man’s role But I will challenge the role of a man and will take no crumbs I refuse to be the symbolic weak woman Expected to fulfill three roles: “Mother, housekeeper, and worker” With few choices, no rights, and controlled by a man Goals I will break with an education and a respected job Remaining a single woman! I will challenge anyone in the community Who come to ridiculed, shun, and pitied me The pen is mightier than the sword And therefore I will gain freedom With an education and a respected job My preparations for my future, I will take on my own 1/8/2016
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Makama Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 10:44 AM
Beautiful! Beautiful, sooooooo beautiful. #7 truly underrates this piece. Great work friend.
Shahein Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 9:20 PM
Great write my friend , enjoyed reading it , hugs / / :) dalia
La France Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Eve, the pen is mightier than the sword, oh I adore that line, I am writing that down for sure, great poem, I love it 7
Roper Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Thank you, Broken Wing, for your wonderful complement and the 7 :) I saw the painting on Debbie's challenge and I like it, but I am not participating. Hugs dear friend
Nance Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 4:05 PM
Rock on, this is a strong write !
Roper Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Thank you, Casarah, for your wonderful complement :) I saw the painting on Debbie's challenge and I like it, but I am not participating. Hugs dear friend
Scars Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 3:53 PM
Sooo determined and you are carrying a wonderful flow! Great poem :)-luloo *smiles*
Roper Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 5:12 PM
Thank you, Laura, I saw the painting on Debbie's challenge and I like it, but I am not participating. Any way smiles with everyone's complements. :)Hugs dear friend
Sage Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 2:54 PM
am not sure your view's alright though...but good luck with it, an excellent write you've done Eve
Roper Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 3:23 PM
Well, I figure no one will want me after the fight . they would want to burn me on a stake :-(
Sage Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 3:19 PM
I meant your view of remaining a single woman...
Roper Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 3:04 PM
White, I don't understand ? I was writing about the 1800 . give me an idea to improve . I was writing about the picture. Hugs Eve
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