My Friend Louie

Perhaps you have a friend that came into your life for just a season.                                                                             And just like that, that friend had to relocate for a very good reason.
I really do not recall that there was much we ever had in common.                                                                                         
But without a doubt, I loved when to their home we were summoned.
Whenever my wife and I were there, I hated when it was time to go.                                                                          He and his wife are most precious, people we are proud to know.

Several years ago when they decided to move away, I greatly opposed.                                                                               I later learned theirs was a selfless move, and I was selfish I suppose.
It was in a study group that I got the news about our friends leaving,                                                              And we each took our turn to pray about the reality of their moving.                                                                                I even recall a few sincere words I used in my prayer to The Lord.                                                                            "If I were you, I'd simply tell them to forget about it Dear Lord".

I suspect that what Louie and I had was something I never had before.                                                         My conversations with him were rare, the kind I came to love and adore.
I saw in Louie no trace of mask or fake, but pure unadulterated genuiness.                                                                     We often disagreed and had heated debates without any duress or distress.
I have seen Louie once or twice since they moved away to Lone Star State.                                                              I miss my friend Louie, especially the way we orchestrated those debates.

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Date: 3/27/2020 10:19:00 AM
curtis, I really like this Rhyme 'My Friend Louie'. Could it be we all had an old friend, one who challenged our norms. One who helped us realize that a different point of view is important, even healthy? Very nice write. -Richard
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Date: 3/20/2020 9:34:00 AM
I like the intimate feel of this piece. As a child we moved every year and connections I made were often severed. I do have a few friends who I maintained connections with.
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