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My Forever Lost Love

When I have fallen in love, with you my heart was burning, it felt like it was on fire, to be with you. It was my one desire to be loved. So I would of given you everything you needed and wante, even a lifetime of promises, not broken and a world full of dreams, that are beyond the most wildest of dreams. But only my heart knows what it means to lose a love like yours. I promise you it won't be one love, with two hearts it would of been a strong love, but now my love, has been lost in your last breath and sweet kiss you gave me so don't tell me to wait because when I'm alone you're the one, I miss and your the one, that has that tender love, that no one has ever shown me but you, so you know its hard to resist the love you've shown me. My heart has fallen in love with you, so when I'm looking upon the stars, at night I am just wishing with all my strength, hoping that someday you will realize, that this passion I have for you, I have it for a reason so, I will hold it inside my soul forever. It doesn't cost anything, so if you ever give your love back it could be mine. I feel truly blessed, because these feelings the Lord has given me, and I wanted to share them with you.

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Faraz Ajmal Date: 8/28/2017 7:24:00 AM A really beautiful write, your words really touches me, someone told me that poetry is all about been clear about your feelings and emotions, and in this case you ve done a really good job, one thing I ll say is that you shouod change your writing style, it was really difficult to read it in that way, make different stanzas and make it a form of poetey, look at the work pf some other experience poets, and one more thing, Do me a favour, well can you plz read my poems as well and comment on them Login to Reply