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My Foolish Heart

Living life dangerously with my heart on my sleeve So reckless, So careless. Others can't conceive Have you no walls? Where is your protection? You're bound to get hurt by self-infliction They look upon me. Baffled and shocked "You foolish girl" they shout. They've mocked Pain is all you'll find taking a risk such as this You'll be left heartbroken over short lived bliss I've heard it all before. Been told a time or two They've even been right. I'll admit that to you Here's what I know. What I learned from it all Love is a risk. Even guarded you can fall Nothing last forever. Everything will change Hearts come together, fall apart, rearrange Rather by choice, by time, or by death Even when it last to someone's final breath But there's no growth without pain As there's no flowers without rain Say what you will, I told you from the start On my sleeve it will stay, my foolish heart

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Date: 10/26/2023 7:11:00 PM
I love this. All of it the rhyming the subject that is so truthful. what I expect when reading poetry. Good job!!
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Date: 10/6/2023 12:52:00 PM
Love is a risk... but so is breathing. Live
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Date: 1/11/2022 12:42:00 PM
"But there's no growth without pain" -- no life without risk. A safe path is sort of a program. Not very interesting once it is learned. God send true lovers a virus! That makes fever a blessing, and recovery a pampered triumph! Love your poem. Joe.
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Date: 5/2/2021 7:36:00 PM
Jessie, 'But there's no growth without pain ~~ As there's no flowers without rain' Lovely sleeve risen from foolish ashes. No better place, no better heart. -Richard
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Jessie Jones
Date: 5/14/2021 2:25:00 PM
<3 Thank you Richard!
Date: 3/24/2021 3:14:00 PM
Great pen Jessie , really liked this one with such great rhyme and flow too. Take care, blessings,Gordon
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Jessie Jones
Date: 3/25/2021 8:23:00 AM
Thank you Gordon! I appreciate it :)
Date: 3/15/2021 11:05:00 AM
You have written an impressive piece with great rhyming.
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Jessie Jones
Date: 3/18/2021 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Robert! <3
Date: 3/14/2021 11:56:00 AM
Much truth in your poem. My favourite line ... No growth without pain, no flowers without the rain. Poetry hugs... Cal Bambi
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Jessie Jones
Date: 3/15/2021 11:02:00 AM
Thank you Cal <3
Date: 2/19/2021 8:40:00 PM
A very beautiful one!
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Jessie Jones
Date: 2/23/2021 12:56:00 PM
Thank you <3

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