My Fondest Brief Unforgettable Moment

First his long and tender gaze. Then came his loving caresses followed by little kisses, delicate dewdrops of sensuous sweetness that he planted gently along my forehead, my cheeks, the back of my neck, and around my ear lobes. Happiness consumed me! Butterfly kisses he showed me with the long lashes of his beautiful dark eyes fluttering like tiny wings against my own. I giggled next as he rubbed his nose to mine; The Eskimo way, he said. As he stroked my back, his fingers lingered at my waist. Unlike others before him, he did not grab for my body with the clumsiness of a boy. He let his smooth kisses linger too so when at last I felt his tongue inside my mouth, it was the sweetest of invasions. . . . . Neither did he press for more than I was prepared to give, for I was a woman-child, still clinging to chasteness, and though I’d known him but a short time, this magical moment was to be our one night together before he returned to a country where I would never go. Our brief time would become the fondest of my memories - one to be rekindled time and time again through poetry. Written 11/23/13 by Andrea Dietrich for nette onclaud's contest: the BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT Poetry Contest (this is honestly a new poem but I've written of this moment so many times, it looks like all those other poems!!)
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Poet Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 12:46 PM
I know these moments.Why do people call a Flower as Petal?
Watson Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 10:05 PM
Goodness me . Some guys have all the luck , lol Sensational as always . Daz
Dome Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 4:15 PM
Beautiful write Andrea.Making a woman feel special and appreciated was always something that came natural. and the memories lingered. I'm sure. Pete..
Seal Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 6:35 PM
I wonder if this guy ever thought he'd leave such a lasting impression Petal, he's cropped up a few times but always in a refreshed memory. Awww, there's always going to be one you never forget. Congratulations are in order I see. Take care, Richard
Breidenthal Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 12:39 AM
Wow- thanks for sharing. This was finely written - surely a most unforgettable moment. Outstanding work. Always, Laura
Jordan Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 9:39 PM
I'm happy that you won with this poem. I enjoyed reading it a second time. Congratulations... Jack
Gasun Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 7:36 AM
Hi, my dear friend Andrea. This is an outstanding poem indeed. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. Thank you so much for sharing! My biggest hearty congratulations in your well-deserved super win not only on this masterpiece but also the rest of your recent winning pieces. Cheers and biggest hugs! Goodnight now. It's Mon. again tomorrow. Tcare! love lots always & 4ever, Leonora
Onclaud Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 10:49 AM
love in one moment in time never to leave you ever, andie.. congrats on your shining win in my contest.. huggs.. how are you?
Horsch Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 10:03 AM
First I want to say congratulations on your win Andrea, I love how you write. Your description of this moment in life was perfection. Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece.....Roger
Jones Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 10:23 PM
Ahh..awesome..congratulations Andrea....so glad you placed high with this...it's great...
Guzzi Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 7:23 PM
LOL that's fine! It is distilled like fine wine! I love this incarnation. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
May Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 4:58 PM
congrats on a fine win Andrea
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 12:08 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: - BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT / / Nette Onclaud contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 5:57 AM
*delicate dewdrops of sensuous sweetness* what a line you have coined here!!Love this poem Andrea.
Johnson Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 4:20 PM
That's the stuff dreams are made of, but not necessariy life. A moment of bliss from a gentle kiss and now you are someone else's wife. Peace. :)
Hamilton Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 6:46 PM
a very lovely rendition of love Andrea superb write Shadow x smile hug
Austin Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 1:58 PM
You just love to keep talking about it, eh? I am so jealous - never had a single moment like this. Love, daver
Sergi Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 12:57 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Dulcinea was really a peasnt woman that Don Quixote imagined to be the most beautiful woman on earth. Everytime my hispanic wife and I would have a spat, She would always tell me to go find my Dulcinea. This poem is a devotion to her .
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November 26, 2013 at 10:03 AM
Lucky is the one who has the chance to live moments of pure love and gentle erotic encounters for they ever linger in the heart and mind as a beackon that elumines the way of future relationsips. A fantastic poem that captivates the reader with its beauty and innocence! a 7!
Sirak Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 8:38 AM
Beautiful and passionate. Our memories are new each time we think of them. This is sure to be a winner.
Jones Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 8:54 PM
This sounds like first love the one we never forget!!!!I was breathless...awesome...:-) :-) :-) :-)
Jones Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 7:36 AM
Got your note Andrea...I can see why this was the best love! No rush...pushing...only..asking...inviting...so perfectly described here...with your beautiful words
Sergi Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 5:17 PM
I love this poem. sweet, emotional and sensual in that order bur alas your loves are always fleeting. A Shakespeare tragedy as your other poem Emmanuel.
Horne Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 3:02 PM
sweet memories indeed, my friend - I bet he still remembers you too - congrats on your wins, of course : )
Sivey Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 5:40 AM
You have yet again impressed me with your skills my friend! I remember you writing of this moment in other poems that you have written, this one expertly described this situation very nicely, I enjoyed it Andrea! I really loved reading this awesome poem this morning, what a tremendous piece, Great Work!!
Mehta Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 4:36 AM
Nice caresses, rubbing his nose, kisses here and there leading to invasions, nice lyrical impressions, Andrea
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