My Fit of Rage June 14 2011

The voices replay in my head over and over again,
they are beginning to sound like a broken record.
I'm screaming inside to make them stop,
it seems as though my voice is the only voice not heard.

Tons of hostility I have stored bottled up inside,
I'm like a ticking time bomb ready to explode.
In a instant, I can fly into a full blown rage,
to carry such a heavy load.

The shaking begins, now the rage is taking control
and the only thing I see is red.
Like a tornado ripping through all in it's path, 
the thunder is pounding inside my head.

Weighed down by all this anger inside,
I am locked within my own rage.
I can't turn it off or make it go away,
I'm stuck within the parameters of my cage.

I would give anything to be considered normal, tell me,
"How do I make it all go away?
What will it take?
What's the price I would have to pay?"

A stamp in my file that I'm stuck with for life,
labeled now and that will never change.
A danger to myself and everyone I'm around,
I'm clinically crazy, totally insane and indefinitely strange.


A remake of Fits of Rage
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 15, 2011 at 3:24 AM
i really like the end to this poem. its realy awesome *luv skat
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June 15, 2011 at 2:09 AM
im sure you've been stalking me, and writing a conclusion on how you think i feel. could of written these words myself. i wholeheartedly relate to this, great write, great read
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