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My First True Love

Ahh my first love, I remember her well Her name appropriately was Janice Valentine Think it was Grade Two though not really sure Tried so hard to be beside her in line My head was spinning for the very first time Wondering what this feeling was about Had never felt anything like this before So excited I wanted to shout Competition was a guy called Glen Maidmont But Janice had nothing to do with us She lived far away, about three streets over She didn't quite understand all the fuss We always remember our very first crush A few others have surely enticed But the first is ingrained deep in my soul Wonder if she's had a good life

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Date: 5/14/2023 4:51:00 PM
....goodt memories.....as kids, heather andt i loved walking....then....somehow... it all went....kaput!......stan
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/15/2023 2:01:00 AM
So sad... married to my first wife 42 years... cancer took her... married her sister 22 years ago! Quite a story eh..
Date: 5/14/2023 4:29:00 AM
So true Jack, we never forget our first loves. The memory stays with us forever. Hope your weekend is going well, nice to see you back. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/14/2023 5:05:00 AM
Can't seem to leave this Poetry Soup thingy... it's ingrained! Hope your weekend going well Thomas!

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