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My First Sonnet

Long ago during my school life One day, I saw a beautiful girl of another school near by She smilled at me first time I did not know why My heart beats did a crime After few days gone I did never see her My first Sonnet till I incur For Contest: Sponsored by PD

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/3/2013 1:09:00 PM

Congratulations bl well done xx

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/3/2013 1:46:00 PM

A lot of thanks for wishing me congratulation. Loved always, bl

Skat A

Date: 6/1/2013 2:32:00 PM

sweet than sweet, CONGRATS on your romantic win! ;-) ~SKAT~

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/2/2013 9:45:00 AM

Many thanks my friend for giving me congrats, loved always, bl

Judy Konos

Date: 6/1/2013 11:40:00 AM

Simply put: GREAT.....Congratulations...

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/2/2013 9:44:00 AM

A lot of thanks for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2013 10:01:00 AM

BL, , CONGRATULATIONS :-)* Thank you for the nice and sweet romantic poem... pin points the watering passion thirst I seek. Always & Forever..... PD

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/1/2013 10:52:00 AM

Thanks.........,a lot always, bl

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/1/2013 9:56:00 AM

Well you have incured a win here B L..' enjoyed the read and congratulations..!

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/1/2013 10:54:00 AM

Many thanks to you my friend for wishing me congrats. Loved always, bl

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/1/2013 9:55:00 AM

Well you have incured a win here B L..' enjoyed the read and congratulations..!

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/2/2013 9:46:00 AM

Many thanks to you my friend for wishing me congrats. Loved always, bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/8/2012 5:17:00 AM

A pleasure to read your poetry today BL. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/8/2012 10:01:00 AM

Thanks for giving time and for reading my write, loved always, bl

John Rhinem

Date: 5/7/2012 12:57:00 PM

Smile ˜ Owww, Makes Myself Reflect Upon Beautiful Sarah Seraphin's Poe, 'Girls In Love,' My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Lady * She Must Have Touched Your Precious Heart Quite Deeply, To Have Inspired A Verse In Love I Might Imagine * Also, Thank You, For Your Beauties Sweet Kind Visit * My. Love, Forever; John!:) ˜

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/8/2012 10:00:00 AM

Many thanks my friend for reading my write, loved always, bl