Bl Devnath Poet Light Verse

My First Sonnet

Long ago during my school life			
                                          One day, I saw a beautiful girl 			
                                              of another school near by			
			
                                              She smilled at me first time			
                                                  I did not know why 			
                                              My heart beats did a crime			
			
                                                 After few days gone			
                                                 I did never see her			
                                             My first Sonnet till I incur	




For Contest: Sponsored by PD

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 3, 2013 at 1:09 PM Congratulations bl well done xx Bl Devnath June 3, 2013 at 1:46 PM A lot of thanks for wishing me congratulation. Loved always, bl

Skat A June 1, 2013 at 2:32 PM sweet than sweet, CONGRATS on your romantic win! ;-) ~SKAT~ Bl Devnath June 2, 2013 at 9:45 AM Many thanks my friend for giving me congrats, loved always, bl

Judy Konos June 1, 2013 at 11:40 AM Simply put: GREAT.....Congratulations... Bl Devnath June 2, 2013 at 9:44 AM A lot of thanks for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A June 1, 2013 at 10:01 AM BL, , CONGRATULATIONS :-)* Thank you for the nice and sweet romantic poem... pin points the watering passion thirst I seek. Always & Forever..... PD Bl Devnath June 1, 2013 at 10:52 AM Thanks.........,a lot always, bl

Joe Maverick June 1, 2013 at 9:56 AM Well you have incured a win here B L..' enjoyed the read and congratulations..! Bl Devnath June 1, 2013 at 10:54 AM Many thanks to you my friend for wishing me congrats. Loved always, bl

Joe Maverick June 1, 2013 at 9:55 AM Well you have incured a win here B L..' enjoyed the read and congratulations..! Bl Devnath June 2, 2013 at 9:46 AM Many thanks to you my friend for wishing me congrats. Loved always, bl

Carol Sunshine Brown May 8, 2012 at 5:17 AM A pleasure to read your poetry today BL. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol Bl Devnath May 8, 2012 at 10:01 AM Thanks for giving time and for reading my write, loved always, bl

John Rhinem May 7, 2012 at 12:57 PM Smile ˜ Owww, Makes Myself Reflect Upon Beautiful Sarah Seraphin's Poe, 'Girls In Love,' My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Lady * She Must Have Touched Your Precious Heart Quite Deeply, To Have Inspired A Verse In Love I Might Imagine * Also, Thank You, For Your Beauties Sweet Kind Visit * My. Love, Forever; John!:) ˜ Bl Devnath May 8, 2012 at 10:00 AM Many thanks my friend for reading my write, loved always, bl