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MY FIRST POEM: A Lesson to be Learned

You said I was nothing I yell back and then go quiet Yeah, your right I guess we're done I'll stop loving you then Next time, men Don't say the truth if you don't want to lose Your girlfriend A Lesson to be learned

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Date: 7/2/2024 10:37:00 AM
welcome to poetry soup its their loss.
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Date: 6/19/2024 10:57:00 PM
Everyday is a lesson... sometimes it's better to walk away..welcome to poetry soup
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Date: 6/19/2024 7:32:00 PM
Dear CuteInsta Girl, your turbulent imagery is expressive of emotional moments of tension, turmoil and ultimately the acceptance of a broken romantic relationship. A poignant piece. Welcome to Poetry Soup! This is a great first poem! :) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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