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My First Day

I felt your hand get away from me to say goodbye to a new world that began, seeing sad faces moistened with tears, and surrounded by two beautiful ladies. I ignored that world where my mother abandoned me for hours. But over the time that strange world was my beginning of a new life; My First Day of: Head Start.

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Date: 11/6/2020 8:03:00 AM
Charlie , I like this poem very much ...on first day teary and nervous we are when our mother leaves but that one step makes up your life . I can totally relate ...great job !
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Charlie Albert Vazquez
Date: 11/6/2020 5:45:00 PM
Dicha, thank you for those sincere words.
Date: 3/10/2017 7:58:00 PM
If I'm understanding this right I can relate to this first day too. Great poem!
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Charlie Albert Vazquez
Date: 3/13/2017 4:15:00 PM
Thank you for your comments. They are my feeling
Date: 3/7/2017 3:07:00 PM
Hi Charlie, Nice work there. Cheers to the new beginning
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Charlie Albert Vazquez
Date: 3/9/2017 2:40:00 PM
Thank you so much for you comment. Just I am trying the best i can.

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