My First Date

I was waiting for you at the corner street standing all alone
Tension was within me as I was on my own
I was thinking of you and your magical presence
That will sweep me away from my own existence
Bedazzled by your beauty and your heavenly eyes 
I bet my life, as they are not lies

I saw you coming at a distance and my heart skipped a beat
The naughty thoughts I thought about you took a major hit
In a red dress you came like an angel from heaven 
And I stood beside you like a black raven
Bedazzled by your beauty and your heavenly eyes
I bet my life, as they are not lies

We sat together to eat our dinner in the candlelight
I was looking at you in amazement and I can do that all night
You were looking so beautiful in the candlelight
With your shinning hair and glowing skin you looked a beautiful site
Your smile proved to me that your feelings for me was not of hate
My night was made so special as you were my first date
Bedazzled by your beauty and your heavenly eyes
I bet my life as they are not lies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/16/2011 8:26:00 AM
A beautiful refrain line you used for this romantic first love tale. Congrats. A job well done with this one.
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Date: 7/15/2011 3:48:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Carol, Sambadi
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Date: 7/15/2011 2:13:00 PM
Congrats Sambadi on your terrific third place win in first date contest with this dynamite write luv..
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Date: 7/15/2011 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest and thank you for supporting my contest Sambadi. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2011 4:57:00 AM
Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry with us Sambadi. I have enjoyed reading your interesting writing today and will be back again soon to read more. May you have a most wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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