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MY FIRST CAR Years ago when I was younger, So I'd not be so encumbered, Wil decided that a car, Would solve our problems near and far. A run about was what I needed, So transportation was not impeded, When he had to go to work, And I clung to him like a dirty shirt. "Let me keep the car today, I'll pick you up without delay. When day is done and you're ready for home, I won't leave you waiting there all alone." But when day was over sure enough, He'd wait and he'd wait by the curb with his stuff; So he bought me a car at a used car lot, Dependable and not costing a lot. I loved it, adored it, I gave it a name. So pretty and feminine, I called her Elaine. Gold was her color, interior brown, Easy on gas, I drove all over town. To work and to school and the grocery store, A gem of a car, could not ask for more. Then one fine day in downtown traffic, A man in a Dodge hit my cute little Maverick. He knocked her right off her two front wheels. I couldn't believe it, my senses reeled. She died on the spot, I cried and cried, "You killed my car!" "It's okay," he sighed. The police arrived and I told them my story, How he came out of nowhere, the details were gorey. "He murdered my car!" I told them again, "It was never alive." he said with a grin. "It was a machine so it cannot be dead." "It won't move again, so it's dead", I said. All through the years I still feel the same, About the man who murdered Elaine. He came out of nowhere in a big Dodge truck, Knocked her right off her wheels, that big dumb cluck. So now when buying a car I endeavor, I say,"Down with Dodge!" and "Ford Forever!" Judy Ball For Carol Brown's My First Car Contest

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Date: 3/14/2012 8:39:00 PM
hahaha, that was so funny that one line: "It was never alive" after you said: you murdered my car. This was so awesome. How did I ever miss it before? BIg number one congratulations, JUDY
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Date: 3/13/2012 3:37:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Judy Ball
Date: 3/13/2012 3:45:00 PM
Thanks so much Christopher. God Bless, JB
Date: 3/13/2012 2:57:00 PM
A very nice win - sorry about Elaine. Mike
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Judy Ball
Date: 3/13/2012 3:33:00 PM
Thanks so much Mike. God Bless, JB
Date: 3/13/2012 2:52:00 PM
I don't know how I missed this one earlier. This is fantastic, Judy. I love it. Congrats on your 1st place win with this witty write! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/13/2012 1:42:00 PM
Congratulations Judy well done xx
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Judy Ball
Date: 3/13/2012 1:45:00 PM
Thanks so much Mandy. God Bless, JB
Date: 3/13/2012 12:38:00 PM
congrats Judy on a grand first place win for this spectacular write my friend.. luv..
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Judy Ball
Date: 3/13/2012 1:49:00 PM
Thanks so much LindaMarie/ God Bless, JB
Date: 3/13/2012 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting "My First Car" contest Judy. Love, Carol
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Judy Ball
Date: 3/13/2012 1:56:00 PM
Thanks so much Carol. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/7/2011 4:47:00 AM
What more could I ask for today? It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. I am reading your poetry in which you share a little of yourself maybe without even realizing it. You have written from your soul oh yes you have. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Judy. Love, Carol
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/7/2011 4:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Carol. I guess we do show others what we are when we write. I posted one this morning that states that called,"Understanding Poetry" Thank you so much for taking time to stop by and for your kind words. God Bless, JB

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