My First Airplane Ride

Well there I was twenty or so and never been in an airplane

Well...it just so happened two new friends of mine, were pilots

With many hours logged time after time

They even had an airplane of their own, which they had just flown over my house

Get off your butt, come have some fun, let us see one of your smiles!

So I climbed into this pop can with wings, anxious as the engine started to sing

Down the runway and up we go, the lump in my stomach started to show

But as I started to look around at the patchwork of beauty on the ground

I began to enjoy this soaring through the air, just looking around

Then these two ornery buddies of mine, looked at each other and grinned

I asked OK what are you up to? Oh nothin' just taking you for a spin

They turned and went low down over the lake, well OK this is kinda pretty

But they knew one wing was out of gas and soon would sputter, spit and quit!

Well needless to say when the engine stopped, I went all white in the face

They said, don't worry sweetheart we're OK, we can glide her in all the way

In? In where? The lake? You didn't ask if I could swim!

They had planned this (joke) for me for quite some time

Wanted me to always remember my first airplane ride

After a few seconds they switched the tanks and started her back up

Up, up and away we went back to the clouds above

I don't know if they cured my fear of flying or made it worse

But, I can tell ya some time later - swoosh swoosh - I hear 

As I took my very first helicopter ride!

©Donna Jones

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/24/2013 12:02:00 AM
My first plane ride was barely more than a month ago! It's still pretty fresh in my memory, and man what a site down below, seeing the land from up so high! This was a really funny story - if not slightly nerve-racking. Are you still talking with those two friends of yours? LOL!
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Date: 4/8/2013 9:11:00 AM
Donna; This is good. I still remember my first plain ride too. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla
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Date: 4/8/2013 3:11:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Lucilla....:-)
Date: 4/5/2013 8:35:00 AM
How exciting this must've been!!! Embracing life's moments. Excellent!
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Date: 4/5/2013 7:40:00 PM
Yes...thanks Drake.....it was great...appreciate you stopping by...Donna
Date: 4/4/2013 8:09:00 PM
donna, this was entertaining. It's a true story? So cute. I lOVE flying.
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Date: 4/4/2013 8:24:00 PM
Yes and I has a blast after all.....thanks for reading...
Date: 4/4/2013 11:37:00 AM
you just remind me of the experience,indeed even today i cant say if i like to fly or not.a good experience well narated.i enjoyed it.
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Date: 4/4/2013 12:05:00 PM
Thank you Joseph...if you do go flying again..maybe go to the grand canyon hey?....thanks for stopping by...Donna
Date: 4/4/2013 8:43:00 AM
They were bad boys... But I always enjoy flying as long as I'm not packed in like a sardine...
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Date: 4/4/2013 12:08:00 PM
Yes they were but I still trust them with my life and flying private is awesome..no sardines...thanks for stopping
Date: 4/4/2013 7:21:00 AM
.... up, up and up ..... let wings fly you high in the sky ... thank you for sharing your experience Donna! - A few years back I got the opportunity to be a pilot in a glider ..... scary but fun! (Copilot) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/4/2013 12:09:00 PM
I bet that was fun....flying with no sound....wow....thanks for reading...
Date: 4/4/2013 7:01:00 AM
Oh, that was SO wrong!...haha. I hate to laugh at the cruel joke, but...HA! Love it, Donna.
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Date: 4/4/2013 12:11:00 PM
Well it wasn't really cruel...you'd just have to know me and my friends...guess we are weird that way....thanks Caleb....love your visits...Donna
Date: 4/4/2013 5:12:00 AM
What a way to tell a story...I still have that fear...great descriptive write.. xx Michael
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Date: 4/4/2013 12:12:00 PM
Well thanks for reading Michael...its worth the view to be scared a while...for. e anyway....have a great day
Date: 4/3/2013 10:59:00 PM
Goodnight Donna I appreciate all your positive comments.
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Date: 4/4/2013 12:13:00 PM
Good morning..and you are welcome..thanks for stopping by
Date: 4/3/2013 9:50:00 PM
Very entertaining read and glad you were here to tell the tale. Ha ha SuZ
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Date: 4/4/2013 12:14:00 PM
Thanks for reading Suzanne and yeah used a guardian angel that day!
Date: 4/3/2013 5:39:00 PM
Cute work..That would be very scary ride indeed...Thanks for stopping by my birds in flight..Sara
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Date: 4/3/2013 8:15:00 PM
Thanks Sara..and I really did enjoy that a lot!!!!
Date: 4/3/2013 7:12:00 AM
LOL... "pop can with wings"... hilarious! Those guys were buggers eh! LOL Happy you survived this "harrowing" experience! Love and big hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 4/3/2013 8:08:00 AM
Yes and them some!...love em both...30 years and counting! Thanks for stopping....Donna
Date: 4/2/2013 5:53:00 PM
Very scary! I'm not sure I could manage a helicopter ride. Very nice work. Jack
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Date: 4/3/2013 8:11:00 AM
I loved it!!! Except for the noise....thanks Jack
Date: 4/2/2013 4:16:00 PM
Sounds scarey, I am glad it was just a joke.
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Date: 4/2/2013 5:39:00 PM
Yeah...a very memorable flight
Date: 4/2/2013 12:54:00 PM
This is an incredible and wondrous write, did you really have your first plane ride like this? Wow, I would have just killed them for frightening me like that, and that would have scared the daylights out of me too Donna, you aren't alone with that one! What a fabulous poem my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 4/2/2013 1:49:00 PM
Yes it happened this way, but they were very capable pilots who would never risk our lives, just showing..me a lil love..haha..I later did fly with them in a helicopter and Learjet! .thanks for stopping...Donna
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