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My Finer Days Always I have traveled far, shore to shore, from Hawaii to that of Maine, Florida's fun, to northwest rain, some of my finer days of yore. My choice of work hailed me further, a people person came to be, The White House to queens, all met me, rock and film stars, days of finer. Be certain that downs and ups dwell, with family forward my ways, parties, birthdays, be wedding days, those finer hours, plus somber knell. Day's I spent be times I borrow, wakes, save me, a finer morrow. 2020 September 27

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Date: 9/28/2020 12:07:00 PM
Nicely penned William with good rhyme and flow too. Take care and blessings from Scotland, Gordon
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/28/2020 3:21:00 PM
My grateful appreciation for your kind considerations, Gordon, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William
Date: 9/28/2020 12:03:00 PM
Hello William Kekaula, this poem is beautifully written. I like how all the words flow. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2020 10:06:00 AM
Hello William, my friend I am glad you like my comment. Enjoy your day my friend. Aloha! Darlene
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/28/2020 3:46:00 PM
My dearest thanks embraces your tendered words, Darlene, for truly I am blessed, Aloha! William
Date: 9/28/2020 10:27:00 AM
Finer tomorrows indeed William. So very nicely stated! Linda
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Date: 9/28/2020 10:35:00 AM
Thanks for the better feeling days, Linda, Aloha! William

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