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July.7.2023
Not for the contest

I have a pussy cat, my cute mischievous pet. She loves me more than anyone, I can bet. Among felines, she is so smart and clever, Too adventurous, never once a bit demure. Sleek and slim she is with whiskers long, They stand out like plastic bristles strong. During day she snuggles on my cot, And sleeps never annoyed by a nagging thought. When my fingers move over my cute elfin, She wakes up and rumbles like a car engine. She has damp nose, delicate ears, and soft silky fur. She nudges on my legs and feet with a soft purr. She often rests on her soft paws with claws sheathed. Sometimes, seen lying with legs outstretched, Nibbling at her own feet with her sandpaper tongue, Curling and twitching with the tail widely flung. At night she wanders out and prowls Searching for her prey like nocturnal owls. Sometimes she comes inside with a frog or fledgling, And into some secret corner steals quietly settling. Once I saw her longingly eyeing the glass jar Which was kept close to the table not far. In it swam merrily a few ornamental fish. Darting up and down in water moving with a swish. I knew what her intent was and moved it to a safer place. I was sure my jar with the fish was safe in the new space. But she continued to entertain her fancy of having the fish, And carried it in her heart like a haunting secret wish. One day I saw water spilled all over and the jar lying broken, And all my fish sadly missing, leaving my heart utterly frozen. Foolish I was to think, she would be satisfied with mice and rats, But over everything, she preferred fish like most other cats.

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Date: 7/8/2023 9:44:00 PM
Aw, such tragicomedy! Shakespeare surely weeps alligator skies from playwright heaven... I'm thinking, just for the halibut, that you ended your story with broken glass for a definite porpoise! ~ Something fishy here
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Date: 7/8/2023 12:38:00 PM
Those little rascal kitty cats! We've had more than our fair share of them and they just keep giving more love than we can handle. And yes - they just can't help but stalk & catch those little gold fish prey! Lovely poem Valsa, Cheers, Terrell
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Date: 7/8/2023 10:08:00 AM
This is cute; but I'm sorry for the fish. Cats will be cats I suppose. I can tell you really love her.
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Date: 7/8/2023 6:32:00 AM
In the enchanting prose of your composition, I discern the sheer delight your feline companion experiences in your cherished presence. Each line emanates an undeniable adoration for your cherished four-legged friend. The symbiotic bond between humans and their animal counterparts, an interplay brimming with affection, is eloquently depicted.
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Date: 7/8/2023 2:11:00 AM
A dazzling yet graceful tribute to your cat. It must provide you with hours of play. So well written. Blessings.
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Date: 7/7/2023 11:50:00 AM
Cats can climb walls! It is nice to have loving pets.
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Date: 7/7/2023 4:38:00 AM
I can see your cat having a time of her life in your beloved company--through this splendid write. Love for your pet exudes from every line. Humans and pets--a mutual exchange filled with love. Best to you.
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