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My Fear...

It was a typical Tuesday night, And I was riding after dark; The clouds had covered up the sky, As I took a shortcut through the park; I always took the same path, Around the monkey bars; There wasn’t a light to be found, No moon and no stars; Nothing seemed to be amiss, As I continued on my way; But I found myself wishing silently, I’d gone home earlier in the day; I found that very strange, Since I usually don’t mind the night; And I couldn’t help but think, Something wasn’t quite right; So I stopped my horse and listened, But there’s not a sound to be heard; And afraid to break the stillness, I utter not a word; My imagination is running wild, And Lil’ can feel my dread; She’s prancing to the side now, Ears pricked at something ahead; I’m trying to still my pounding heart, But through my veins it’s spreading fear; I struggle to maintain the silence, As through the darkness we move near; I can see something up there moving, Stalking towards us through the night; A horrible creature coming closer, I pale to the purest white; Then the animal walks into view, Like it’s coming out of a fog; And he lets out a happy bark, The monster was my dog; I’m feeling kind of stupid now, Getting scared so easily; Turns out the thing I need to fear, Is the imagination trapped in me!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/14/2010 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations Tirzah on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Twist and SHOCK" Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 9:45:00 PM
Good one, Tirzah! congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/10/2010 3:19:00 PM
wow! congrats!
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Date: 8/8/2010 8:00:00 AM
Wonderful poetry Tirzah. It's amazing how the mind can take over and make you see things more than they are. Congrats with gem >> James
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:36:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Tirzah
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Date: 8/7/2010 12:01:00 PM
Congrats Tirzah on your big win in the Twist and Shock contest ..this was beautiful and exceptional when I first read it.. even more on second read.. enjoy another momentous victory my friend..with luv..
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:29:00 AM
Very spell binding. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:21:00 AM
Sneaky imagination indeed!!! Super congrats Tirzah on your 3rd place win ^_^! You sure got me hooked with this-- loved how you set the tone here too--I could just imagine this clearly-- got me fearful for you ;) -- nikko :)
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Date: 7/20/2010 3:36:00 PM
HA! That was really good, you actually had me anticipating the wost... and bit fearful, a lot suspenseful. You are definitely on my favorite poets list... and you're another horsewoman! LOVE IT!
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