Darren White Poet Quatrain

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My Favourite Place To Rest

I smile at you but you can't see
My back is resting 'gainst your chest
Without this harness I'm so free
Your back's my favourite place to rest

You hold me up in your strong grip
My afro hair's tickling your face
I giggle when you sneeze, and slip
A kiss on your full lips, and trace

A finger along your stubbled jaw
Before I gaze in your brown eyes
Where all I needed I just saw:
A love so deep, without disguise.

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January 23, 2017

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Carol Eastman January 26, 2017 at 4:00 PM You have a way with words that paints a very vivid picture. Bravo! Darren White January 27, 2017 at 12:13 AM Thank you, Carol :)

White Wolf January 24, 2017 at 3:49 AM Beautifully written, Duir! /|\ I just remembered I forgot to keep the last one, so now I have to go back again! Haha Darren White January 24, 2017 at 3:51 AM Now, go back and keep it! And fave it so you won't forget, haha Budgie. Glad you like this one too :)

Sara Ella January 23, 2017 at 1:36 PM So romantic and real <3 Love <3 *sigh* :) Darren White January 23, 2017 at 11:31 PM Hehehe, you, big romantic, you :D <3

Jan Allison January 23, 2017 at 9:02 AM what an adorable declaration of your love - absolutely beautiful Darren no wonder Boo loved it:-) hugs Jan xx Darren White January 23, 2017 at 9:47 AM He did, he loved it :)

Claudia Polydoro January 23, 2017 at 5:48 AM Love is the most amazing thing... gorgeous poem, my friend <3 Darren White January 23, 2017 at 7:11 AM Thanks my friend. Love is love :) <3

Jason Williams January 23, 2017 at 4:21 AM Oh wow! It's too early in the morning to be making me cry Baby. So sweet. You lift up my heart with your own. Love you <3 Darren White January 23, 2017 at 7:10 AM Love you too <3 :)