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I smile at you but you can't see My back is resting 'gainst your chest Without this harness I'm so free Your back's my favourite place to rest You hold me up in your strong grip My afro hair's tickling your face I giggle when you sneeze, and slip A kiss on your full lips, and trace A finger along your stubbled jaw Before I gaze in your brown eyes Where all I needed I just saw: A love so deep, without disguise. *** January 23, 2017

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Date: 1/26/2017 4:00:00 PM
You have a way with words that paints a very vivid picture. Bravo!
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Darren White
Date: 1/27/2017 12:13:00 AM
Thank you, Carol :)
Date: 1/24/2017 3:49:00 AM
Beautifully written, Duir! /|\ I just remembered I forgot to keep the last one, so now I have to go back again! Haha
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Darren White
Date: 1/24/2017 3:51:00 AM
Now, go back and keep it! And fave it so you won't forget, haha Budgie. Glad you like this one too :)
Date: 1/23/2017 1:36:00 PM
So romantic and real <3 Love <3 *sigh* :)
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Darren White
Date: 1/23/2017 11:31:00 PM
Hehehe, you, big romantic, you :D <3
Date: 1/23/2017 9:02:00 AM
what an adorable declaration of your love - absolutely beautiful Darren no wonder Boo loved it:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 1/23/2017 9:47:00 AM
He did, he loved it :)
Date: 1/23/2017 5:48:00 AM
Love is the most amazing thing... gorgeous poem, my friend <3
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Darren White
Date: 1/23/2017 7:11:00 AM
Thanks my friend. Love is love :) <3
Date: 1/23/2017 4:21:00 AM
Oh wow! It's too early in the morning to be making me cry Baby. So sweet. You lift up my heart with your own. Love you <3
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Darren White
Date: 1/23/2017 7:10:00 AM
Love you too <3 :)

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