My Favourite Leaf

My Favourite Leaf

When someone mentions leaves, I always think of fall,
It precedes winter’s introduction, a slow rambling crawl
Visualizing the leaves of burnt orange and crimson red,
Inspiring excitement for the celebrations that lie ahead. 

While most people think that the maple leaf is the prettiest of all,
Together these leaves display horizons, a brillant, colour sprawl,
But the leaf I love most is slid into my dining table to add length,
Means my family will sit all together again, our eternal strength.


Written October 3, 2011
By Lee Ramage 
For Carol Brown’s contest
Leaves, Leaves, Leaves
Won 2nd place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Tsiluma Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 2:42 AM
LOVELY!!! Strong family ties abound where laughter and communication resound and anything to bring families closer is to be welcomed. Very nice take on the theme Lee!
Bordner Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 12:22 PM
A smart piece Lee, and a very substantive message too - my favorite leaves are the one that don't fall - its always great to read poetry that celebrates nature, such as family trees - J.A.B. %
Song Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 6:06 PM
Holy Smokes, Lee! This is great! You brought me to my grandmother's home in the last 2 lines....so lovely! God bless you and your gifts of poetry. Gwendolen
Ramage Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 7:23 PM
Thanks so much for your kind comments. Lee
Freeman Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 1:33 PM
A wonderful thought Lee, A worthy poem for second place. Agape, Moses
Ramage Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 7:24 PM
THank you so much. Lee
Johnson Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 6:25 PM
Extra leaf in the family table, makes it longer stronger Mabel, great poem here ....Don
Ramage Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 7:24 PM
Thank you Lee
Guzzi Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 4:40 PM
such a cool twist..love it you didn't take the road most traveled. congrads light &love
Ramage Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 7:24 PM
thanks so much. Lee
Sweetheart Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 11:08 AM
Congrats Lee on a superb win with this beautiful composition on leaves for the contest luv.. amazing lines of imagery flow...
 Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 1:08 PM
Thanks Lee
George   Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Awesome!!! Lee. You truly have the heart of a poet. Love, Elaine
Ramage Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 1:09 PM
Thanks Elaine. Lee
Quigley Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 10:55 AM
Nice twist on the Leaves theme Lee. Congratulations on your win
Ramage Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 1:09 PM
Thanks Bob. Lee
Richards Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 10:34 AM
I love the twist you have taken with this wonderful poem, Lee!! I wish I had thought of this.....and now I can agree that the favorite leaf I too, will now think of under this topic...will be the leaf that brings our family together!! (and it actually takes more than one leaf to fit us all around the same table!!)
Ramage Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 1:09 PM
Thanks Carrie
Brown Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 7:49 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in my contest "Leaves Leaves Leaves" judged today 10/12/2011. Thank you for your support of my contest Lee. Love, Carol
Ramage Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 1:10 PM
Thanks so much Carol. Lee
Beck Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 5:51 AM
This is Beautiful Lee. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement - Michelle
Ramage Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 1:10 PM
THanks Michelle
Horne Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 9:34 AM
Clever write - reminds me of my gran's table : ) Many congrats on all your wins, my friend
Ramage Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 1:11 PM
thanks Jack. Lee
Foster Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 12:37 AM
A nice take on the use of a different kind of leaf. not so many tables have them these days. and you are so right, nothing beats the family all around the one table. well penned Lee. good luck....cheers Margaret
Ramage Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 1:11 PM
Thanks so much Margaret. lee
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace