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My Favorite Shoes Ain't Mine

My favorite shoes in the closet they sit. I've never worn 'em not even a bit. Cuz before I was born, By my Dad they were worn, I'll not wear them 'til I'm sure they'll fit. Just for SKAT's contest

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Date: 2/5/2011 6:15:00 PM
Nice social commentary here, Bill. It seems our fathers' "shoes" were too big for anyone to fill. This is witty, but also makes us think about the Greatest Generation's incredible fortitude and wisdom. I'm sorry to hear you've been ill; hope you are better now and it's so nice to see you posting again. Welcome back! (And best wishes in the contest.) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/5/2011 5:17:00 PM
Very humorous and funny write, William
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