My Favorite Melody

from the edges 
of this undying grass
the crickets 
are playing
a symphony  

your voice
carries
in the winds
the lyrics
of my heart
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Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 9:00 AM
This wonderful poem is so pastoral romantic, how could the Romantic Warrior not love it. Splendid poetry, Sandra. Aurora bright write. Love and more love always.
Adams Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 12:28 PM
thank you so much Freddie, glad you liked this one ...sometimes i scribble quick little musings.... hugs :)
There Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 11:16 PM
Very sweet ~ I can almost hear the crickets. Knowing those lyrics are out there on the breeze is a tease...will you share? ;)
Adams Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 11:02 AM
of course i will share... the crickets were singing loudly while i was stopped at a local park...i so love nature... hugs
Wolf Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 5:00 PM
Magical for me. Truly an awaking of an 'A-dams-el' orchestra. Beautifully penned, my friend. Smiles, Gershon
Adams Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 9:20 AM
Thank you Gershon...a sunny day held a small bit of inspiration :) hugs
Mcconnell Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 3:43 PM
Such a beautiful piece Sandy, this touches one's heart so melodically making it another of your gems. hugs and blessings, Gordon
Adams Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 9:20 AM
Thank you so much Gordon :) hugs
Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 3:28 PM
Lovely poem, Sandra.
Adams Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 9:19 AM
Thank you so much Line :) hugs
Hamilton Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 3:04 PM
You got me with this one, short and sweet, lyrics of the heart...indeed!
Adams Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 9:19 AM
Thank you John, we had a beautiful day after the rains the day before...i was sitting at a park and the crickets were singing, the wind picked up and a quick poem was born :) hugs
Pandit Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 2:58 PM
I enjoyed the tune of your melody, Sandy.
Adams Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 9:18 AM
Thank you so much Vijay :) hugs
One Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 2:57 PM
Very sweet..
Adams Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 9:17 AM
Thank you my friend :) hugs
Proxenos Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 2:49 PM
Great write Sandra - 'your voice carries in the winds the lyrics of my heart' - I can sense and feel the wind! Hugs, Jennifer.
Adams Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 9:17 AM
Thank you so much Jennifer, this was a quick penning from the crickets singing and the wind kicking up... :) hugs
Green Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 2:37 PM
And beautiful lyrics I am certain that they are. Melodies of the heart are always the best harmonies we can hear. Beautifully sung my friend.
Adams Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 2:40 PM
Thank you. I was sitting on the warm parking lot at the park and the crickets were singing. The wind was softly blowing and a quick poem was born :) hugs
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