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My Favorite Melody

from the edges 
of this undying grass
the crickets 
are playing
a symphony  

your voice
carries
in the winds
the lyrics
of my heart

dayfree verse

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/27/2019 9:00:00 AM

This wonderful poem is so pastoral romantic, how could the Romantic Warrior not love it. Splendid poetry, Sandra. Aurora bright write. Love and more love always.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/27/2019 12:28:00 PM

thank you so much Freddie, glad you liked this one ...sometimes i scribble quick little musings.... hugs :)

Hello There

Date: 10/24/2019 11:16:00 PM

Very sweet ~ I can almost hear the crickets. Knowing those lyrics are out there on the breeze is a tease...will you share? ;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/25/2019 11:02:00 AM

of course i will share... the crickets were singing loudly while i was stopped at a local park...i so love nature... hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/23/2019 5:00:00 PM

Magical for me. Truly an awaking of an 'A-dams-el' orchestra. Beautifully penned, my friend. Smiles, Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/24/2019 9:20:00 AM

Thank you Gershon...a sunny day held a small bit of inspiration :) hugs

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/23/2019 3:43:00 PM

Such a beautiful piece Sandy, this touches one's heart so melodically making it another of your gems. hugs and blessings, Gordon

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/24/2019 9:20:00 AM

Thank you so much Gordon :) hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/23/2019 3:28:00 PM

Lovely poem, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/24/2019 9:19:00 AM

Thank you so much Line :) hugs

John Hamilton

Date: 10/23/2019 3:04:00 PM

You got me with this one, short and sweet, lyrics of the heart...indeed!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/24/2019 9:19:00 AM

Thank you John, we had a beautiful day after the rains the day before...i was sitting at a park and the crickets were singing, the wind picked up and a quick poem was born :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/23/2019 2:58:00 PM

I enjoyed the tune of your melody, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/24/2019 9:18:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay :) hugs

Silent One

Date: 10/23/2019 2:57:00 PM

Very sweet..

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/24/2019 9:17:00 AM

Thank you my friend :) hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/23/2019 2:49:00 PM

Great write Sandra - 'your voice carries in the winds the lyrics of my heart' - I can sense and feel the wind! Hugs, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/24/2019 9:17:00 AM

Thank you so much Jennifer, this was a quick penning from the crickets singing and the wind kicking up... :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 10/23/2019 2:37:00 PM

And beautiful lyrics I am certain that they are. Melodies of the heart are always the best harmonies we can hear. Beautifully sung my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/23/2019 2:40:00 PM

Thank you. I was sitting on the warm parking lot at the park and the crickets were singing. The wind was softly blowing and a quick poem was born :) hugs

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