My Favorite Little Black Dress

I have always had a little black dress;
more than one, but rarely more than one at a time.
My favorite one was borrowed by a cousin.
Someone I did not know well.
I had offered her other dresses,
but she grabbed the one I really did not want to loan to her.
Every fiber of my being said “NO! Do not loan this one!”
It was my all-time favorite little black dress.
It had rhinestones embedded in it, and it looked fabulous on me.
She seemed sincere in telling me she would bring it back.
And she was a first cousin.
I have never forgotten that she never brought it back.
I called her and asked for it several times.
She called me six months later and told me she had brought it back.
“I gave it to your kids,” she said. I knew it was a lie.
Thanks to her deceit, I
now listen to that voice that says “NO!” and I believe it.
This happened forty years ago, but I have never forgotten it.
A lesson learned in pain.
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Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 7:26 PM
Yikes! The unfortunate truth is someone may not return what they borrow. We are pushed into letting them but you shouldn’t have to when it is something you really have a fondness for.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 10:50 PM
I should have never lent her that dress!
Bauer Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 5:37 PM
Oh, this made me feel sad for you but more ticked off at your cousin, Caren! Grrrrrr! Good lesson to learn, though, but sorry you had to learn it that way…
Krutsinger Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 10:50 PM
I have never liked her. I did not like her much before, but....
Hankins Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 10:13 AM
A lesson well-learned...good! I wonder how she lives with herself?
Hankins Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 10:22 AM
And I would avoid her like the plague!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 10:50 PM
She is a very wealthy, angry, prissy, uptight, mean woman
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