My Father

My father he's one of a kind Very smart and wise. He takes care of me everyday, I dred every second he's away. If we fight I'm sorry but it's alright Because I love you Through day and night. Even if you're a million miles away We are connected anyway With a force bigger than you think A force that my heart brings

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/24/2016 2:01:00 PM

Oh ..I see you participated in a contest. I hardly participate, but am glad you did, and you did so well so it seems ::) Congrats. Your dad is indeed a great dad..The world need more dads like him. Adding it to my favourites'list and a 7.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/24/2016 2:01:00 PM

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/29/2016 4:59:00 PM

How lovely Elena. Congratulations on your wonderful win! ; )

Eve Roper

Date: 5/28/2016 10:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Elena, the love of a father is very important.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/28/2016 7:28:00 PM

Your Daddy is a winner and so is your poem. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/28/2016 2:34:00 PM

A lovely win, Elena... Linda

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/28/2016 1:14:00 PM

Aww, this is such a sweet and very touching write for your dad-- and I am reading his comments below and it's just so beautiful to see... You are both so blessed to have such a beautiful father-daughter relationship. I loved your 3rd stanza the best here, Elena... it says so much. I love the idea of that "force" being from your heart. Btw, I just want to let you know, there's a missing letter "a" in "dread". Keep on writing your heartfelt writes, Elena :D!

Matthew Pisani

Date: 5/25/2016 11:21:00 AM

Elena .. you touched my heart with this poem. You make me proud in so many ways. Please keep progressing with your poetic skills so you can touch the hearts and reach out with your talent to so many more people. Love Dad.

Elena Pisani
Date: 5/26/2016 1:31:00 AM

I love you with all my heart, I am very proud of this poem because it is about you. The best father in the world

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/25/2016 7:14:00 AM

The closeness you have with your father, lovely!

Tim Smith

Date: 5/25/2016 7:13:00 AM

Very lovely post Elena. Fathers are very important and a blessing. It sounds like he is a great dad.