My Fallen Star

She shone the brightest.
The Sun of our kind.
When we said devoted,
She came to mind.
We know not what tripped her,
We failed to alert.
We all took the beating,
And boy does it hurt.

A belt-less Orion,
No Star in the North
My DEEPEST of prayers,
Is what i put forth.
Heaven knows what's
In the heavens above,
But as for our cluster,
She still has our love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Aldana Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 3:44 AM
• Creative • Bomb • Addictive Read • Entertaining
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May 19, 2009 at 6:41 PM
wow this is totally diferent but i loves it ur amazing kiddo =]]TinkBabyy
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August 25, 2008 at 6:03 PM
Your writing is beautiful. It's nice to see how much you care for your fallen star.
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