Get Your Premium Membership

My Fallen Star

She shone the brightest. The Sun of our kind. When we said devoted, She came to mind. We know not what tripped her, We failed to alert. We all took the beating, And boy does it hurt. A belt-less Orion, No Star in the North My DEEPEST of prayers, Is what i put forth. Heaven knows what's In the heavens above, But as for our cluster, She still has our love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/19/2009 6:41:00 PM
wow this is totally diferent but i loves it ur amazing kiddo =]]TinkBabyy
Login to Reply
Date: 8/25/2008 6:03:00 PM
Your writing is beautiful. It's nice to see how much you care for your fallen star.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs